Hi all….im bored so i decided to write this story……..
The sky was a beautiful azure blue as Diana stalked around Maple Island.Mom was out.Diana sat down and sighed.It had been tiring to do ALL the house chores and finish her homework in one day.”ive never wanted to be an
adventurer more than ever”she said out loud to herself.Suddenly,she stepped on something sharp.”Ouch!” Diana cried.
Looking carefully at the grass,she found a sword someone had dropped.At first,she was scared to pick it up.Later,she
curiously picked ths sword up.It was sharp,but looked battleworn.Some parts of it was chipped off and dirty.
Something moved ahead.Judeing by the way the grass seemed to move her way,it was coming for her.Suddenly,
the thing revealed itself.It was a snail!Diana turned to run,as most people on Maple Island feared the snails.However,
a reckless dareing struck her and she turned back to the snail,sword in her hands.Diana jumped forward and stabbed the snail with the sword.The sword broke the snail’s shell and pierced through it!Diana felt a wave of relive wash over her.Suddenly,a voice behind her said”Well Done Diana.”
PLEASE READ “Maplestory-story2″FOR THE CONTINUED VERSION OF THIS BLOG
Reads just like me when I’m trying to compress an SMS and remove all the spaces between my sentences. And I’d rather read your continuation on the same blog, cause I’m lazy.
Welcome to MMOtales.
Same comment as Silver, except replace her name with mine
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Nice. So far. Lol welcome.
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I not liek this.
Welcome to MMOtales.”
Little improvement, and it’s fine.
Try writing another story. This looks like my first story before the one I posted here.
Which means you’ll get better if you start over completely.
Shtop Double Poshting.