Since I had extra time on my hands, I decided to write the next part.
The more support I get, the more I write.
Anyways, here is the next part.

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I felt as if I was dieing. A bright light shone on the end of a deep tunnel.
I went closer to the light, but half way someone stopped me.
It was Diana. She kept telling me that I couldn’t leave yet, that my work in this world wasn’t finished. Then all of a sudden all my friends seemed to appear there too. All pushing me away from the light. I seemed to have been going farther and father away from the bight light, until finally…

*Pant* I had awaken breathing heavily with sweat dripping down my face. I guess I had awaken a little too late. The forest or Ellinia was destroyed. Chaos had struck this place. All the houses were burned, trees were cut and blood was spilled everywhere. It was a terrifying sight to look at.

I tried to figure out who or what had caused this, but I hadn’t had not even one clue.
I attempted to contact Gilbert, but his communicator was off. I tried reaching Diana but her communicator was also off. All I could do right now was think of what had caused this.

Suddenly, my old friend passed by me to help.

“Wow, Swat, what happened to you and this place?” Rob asked.
“I haven’t the slightest clue, all I remember was getting knocked out.” I answered.

He handed me some potions to help me recover but the strike to my chest was just too painful to bare. I dropped down from the pain. I groaned and held my chest while it was bleeding. Rob took me to the Niora hospital in Kerning City. The hospital kept saying that I would recover soon, but the pain just seemed to become worse and worse. Finally, after a week or two, I was able to fight and train again.

I kept training hard, so if I ever find out who did that to Ellinia, I will get revenge.
I trained with Rob, and Gilbert. Gilbert was weaker then me but still pretty strong he wore his dark avarice on one hand and work gloves on the other. He used steelies that Rob gave him as a gift since subis were weak. He also wore a full dark set, his dark shadow shirt and pants combined with the pirate hat with a skull on it, which I assumed was a pilfer looked very how you say, “cool”.
Rob on the other hand was a lot stronger then both of us. He held his godly fairfrozem with both hands and wore the best armor suited for him. He wore dark commodore shirt and pants. I on the other hand, wore my dark anakamoon and held my thorns tightly while wearing my dark seraphis. We were all strong in our own ways.

One day, after a lot of training, I decided to watch television. To my surprise I saw Justin on top of a Balrog, and he was ordering the gigantic beast to destroy Sleepywood. It was a news report on the menace of how Justin would destroy every little thing that came to oppose him.

I quickly grabbed my communicator and contacted Gilbert and Rob, who had also seen the news. We all got equipped for what seemed like that batter of our lives. When we all arrived at Sleepywood we all stared in fear that already half of it was destroyed. We saw Justin on top of the Balrog commanding it to destroy more helpless townspeople.

“Justin, you better stop now before we make you stop!” I ordered.
“Well, is that a challenge I hear? Come and show me what you got.” He shouted.

The three of us charged at him at an unbelievable speed thanks to Gilbert and his haste.
We fought the beast for what seemed like hours. Sweat and blood covered Sleepywood because of us. Gilbert just collapsed and fainted from the battle. I quickly teleported to him and put him in the hotel. Rob and I continued to fight. We were real tired but we knew the Balrog was getting weaker. All of a sudden we heard someone casting an incantation, green aura covered our bodies and we felt refreshed. To our surprise it was our good friend Josie who was a Priest. With one final attack we all charged up and attacked it. It almost fell down, but to finish the job, Rob took his fairfrozen, gripped it as hard as he could charged at the best.

“Slash blast!” he yelled.

With one fell swoop Rob hit the Balrog right in the heart, and the Balrog just seemed to vanish.

We all dropped to the floor tired and sleepy.

I, though had something else disturbing in my mind…
Something was wrong…
I just couldn’t put my finger on it.

Just then I felt an arrow shot right at me, it hit me 100% accurately in the heart.
I could not feel myself nor could I breath.
I could feel myself slipping from the world.
It seemed as I had died…

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