MapleStorys Hero Prt.6

Heres the prt 6 of my stories.

“Well thats just touching,we lose grendel and Dark Lord,lets see Anythingggggg else here go wrong,it’ll make my day!” said Thomas in dissapoinment.We tought that going from Victoria Island to Orbis would be a good idea,we nodded and went to the ship,it was destroyed 2 months ago from the raid of Crimson Balrogs coming from orbis to attack all warriors.

Well,we better get going said Mike,The warriors were right behind us.While on the ship,its engine broke down,”Thomas,Mike,warriors! get out of the ship,its engine didnt brake down,we have a Crimson Balrog!,I said,we all ran out at the speed of light for our lives ignoring the fact that we were in mid air.
The Crimson Balrog attacked using a bolt of black force and hit Thomas,he was stung with darkness.
NOOOOOOOOOOOO You will pay! and after that,Mike,Me,and the 20 warriors started to glow,I used my Savage Blow and attacked him with a Blinding white light,Mike slashed his axe as it was filled with light,it seemed as if by our dissapointment made us stronger,we attacked the Balrog 1 more time and it fell off the ship.

Thomas are you allright?” asked Mike and I,the warriors bow’d down in shame,it was too late,Thomas was injected with darkness,we would have to bring him to Orbis Hospital,but we were barely at Orbis,”We still need 3 days until we get to Orbis that he might not even make it.

AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Screamed Mike and I,we were so mad we would kill a Balrog no comment!”Forget it Mark,were gonna have to find a way to atleast give him some light without it coming to being outside,we could all die with the Balrogs that come” said Mike.I nodded and brought him inside,stupid mind of mine,if I never told the warriors to make him a warrior,Mike could’ve healed him already.

One day after Thomas’s hit we were only 7 hours until we got to orbis,”Hold on Thomas” I said as Mike was ashamed.Again,we heard the dark voice “ Just give up pathectic Maplers,Grendel and Dark Lord is the strongest thing ever,without them your nothing,my Balrogs have already stung your friend with Darkness,he can never make it,my friends are the death sisters,they cut a string when your time is up,and for Thomas,he has 6 hours before his funeral comes,hahahahahahahahahhahahaha!”.

To be continued……

Will Thomas live and be Darkness free?

Will Mark and Mike save Thomas?

Will this day be Thomas’s LAST day?

Stay tuned~

One thought on “MapleStorys Hero Prt.6”

  1. Nice continuation, and your spelling is getting more clean! >:D
    I liked your protrayal of the myth Hercules when you spoke of the death sisters and their strings. Keep it up!

    ~’-‘~Rob~’-‘~
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