MapleStory’s Hero Prt.2

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Thank you for riding,come again! said Captin Shank as we went off in search for Kerning City,everything was different,no snails,no mushrooms,like everything vanished.When we got to Kerning City,noone was there,noone was even joining a PQ!.

Soon,we met with DarkLord “Mark, its you again!” came from the very deep darkness in there,who could only be Dark Lord.”I must tell you,Dances With Balrogs has gone a war with over 500 Crimson Balrogs,not even his finest warrior,Tiger can defeat them all” “And Athene Pierce has gone to a war also with GateKeepers,MushRooms,Death Teddies,and every monster known to man.

Thomas stood up,”Then why are we waiting!Mark,here’s a Korean Fan my mom gave me,now lets go to Grendel To regain my powers!”He screamed,I nodded and ran off The world is in your hands,Mark and Thomas,do not let it down I heard as I was running.

“Oh Thomas,Long time no see!” Said Grendel,as I just found out Mark was an Ice Wizard, minutes of magican talk later “Hmmm,yes Thomas,the war has begun,In the Maple History book #3,It says one day the monsters would join forces and attack all cities,we would surely lose,Noone Belived this so they were never ready,we have lost more than 600 Of our Magicans already,We don’t want to lose more”he said in a sad voice.

Man,Thomas is taking it hard Grendel Ordered One of his Cleircs and Ice Mages to revive some life and Ice power to him,”Go,the world is in your hands,do not let it down” Said Grendel as he dissapeared.
How are me and Thomas are to save the world,im only level 39,and hes 43,even with our powers we would never win But I never gave up easily,and Now,the Journey begins.

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2 thoughts on “MapleStory’s Hero Prt.2”

  1. Lol rushed but awesome. Just some notes:

    When you add comma’s, don’t try to add them too often because tehn it’s just silly.
    Also with comma’s, you have to use the word, the comma, hit spacebar, and then type your next word for it to be proper.
    A few other minor things that I know you can fix because they were just briefly missed. Good Job, and keep it up! I’ll continue to read. 😀

    ~’-‘~Rob~’-‘~
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