The Black Angel Part 6

Btw, my ‘thoughts’ are now gonna be in the “( )”
Well I was bored so eh heres the next part lol =D

To a new journey…Where everything might change in a split moment…

I fell straight into the seemingly pit of doom, and it was pitch black, so all I was doing was yelling my *** off while I’m in this hole that someone has pushed me into (it’s probably Baldy). And after what maybe probably five minutes of falling and yelling over and over again (Pfft, useless though, no one answered), I finally fell on my stomach (Oh and did I mention that my Thorns staff was under my stomach? Gosh, that really did describe why the staff was called Thorns). Anyways, I stood up and it seemed that I was below ground level. Since my ignorant friends didn’t come down, I decided I would explore this place. I went farther down, and found another hole, and surrounding the hole was water. I waded through the water and jumped into the hole. I splashed into the water and into the ocean. I swam lower and lower (Yes, somehow I can breathe underwater) and swam as fast as I could to the city.

After swimming into the treacherous sea, the pressure was pounding me down, but after passing seals, penguins with snorkel gear (O.o) blowfishes, and other monsters, I finally made it to the city. I noticed though, while I was trying to fend off the monsters, my fire arrow wasn’t working so well… (Uh oh) But I made it to the city and went to get potions. I explored and saw the Zoo, and I was standing on a platform. I heard something behind me so I turned around to see Tiffany and a Jr. Balrog behind her.

“Oh, my, god. Tiffany RUN THERE’S A JR. BALROG BEHIND YOU!” I screamed out to Tiffany, who was just two feet away, and could perfectly hear me without me screaming.

“Oh, don’t worry, this one won’t hurt you and you better not attack it,” Someone said behind me. It was the tour guide (I think).

I stood nervously looking at the black beaming eyes and decided that maybe he was safe… (MAYBE >=O) and then asked why Tiffany was still here. She was, after all, only level thirty.

“Oh, I came with Pirotesss to make sure you were okay cuz you kinda fell into this big black hole that seemed endless, oh and by the way, Baldy pushed you in,” Tiffany said. (I knew it >=[ that arse -.-)

“Well, shouldn’t we go back up?,” Pirotesss said suddenly behind me.
“Wait, I wanna explore!” Tiffany said.
“You’re too low leveled!” I said.
“I am not! Now let me or else I will knock you out again!” Tiffany demanded.

I gave up. It doesn’t really matter anyways. So we explored finding more weird monsters, like big humungous shrimps, seahorses, and really pointy, sharp things. We made it to the end though. And just when we were going to head back, someone came.

“Well, well. Ironic that I find you here Christi…” The person said. I turned around. It was that black winged angel we saw before… She was now wearing level fifty clothes.

“What do you want?!” I asked, more confidently now because I am stronger.

“Oh, nothing, besides maybe for you to come back to the dark realm…” She answered. Her gleaming, ebony eyes were staring straight into my violet eyes.

“What that? I won’t!” I exclaimed.

“Well then, fight for your life!” She said just before she took out her Rower in one hand, and Bronze Arrows in the other hand. She jammed the arrows into the Rower and started shooting an army of arrows at me and my friends.

“Swim for your life!” I shouted. I knew that I was too weak in this place to kill her or at least make her go away. But the arrows kept raining down on us, and those spiky, pointy things kept stinging us, that we were barely conscious. Pirotesss was doing her best to heal us, but it wasn’t very effective now, and Tiffany was just dying.

Where everything might change in a split second…

I heard the mysterious girl shriek in pain. My eyes were blurring, and slowly, I fell into darkness, but the last thing I saw was a bowman wearing level sixty clothing coming at me…

~Other end of Orbis Tower <1st Floor>~
“Should we go get them?” Kerry asked. Baldy shook his head.
“Yes we should!” Jean told them.
“Er… isn’t it bad to be in water if you’re a fire wizard?” Isaac asked.
“Um..” Zak thought.

“Yes it is.” A man in a corner said. He was shrouded in the darkness and he whispered something into his device. He turned his attention back to the group, “So, this is her group of friends that did nothing to protect her. How pitiful that she made friends with losers like you… You might as well die…” the mysterious man said just before he ran towards the group, ready for a battle.

She has been destined to break what was unbreakable,
And she won’t fail.

~End of The Black Angel Part 6~
Welp, this part had some action >=O lol anyways the next part will have some action too well I hope O.o still haven’t wrote it… ehehe

Pirotesss: YAY PART 6 IS OUT W00T, and WAT u haven’t wrote the NEXT ONE?!
Tiffany: Yea!! Now write the next one >=O (Gives me wat to write for her -.-)

I hope you read it ^^ Comments? Constructive critism? Liked it?
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Sadly I am forced to read the book The World is Flat -.- yea a twelve year old is reading about financial stuff already >.> (It’s all my bro’s fault >=O) oh and PIXIES!
1st- Baldy in Aquaroad 2nd- Kerry in aquaroad *he was afking* 3rd- Pirotess’ other acc and wat i said when she died, 4th- her reaction to wat i said, 5th- MY TWIN >.>

15 thoughts on “The Black Angel Part 6”

  1. lol my other character is a noob though in the golem tempel!Thats y i transverd alot of potions n y did u speak for tiffany n me?

  2. lol nifty storty too bad you’re too weak to do anything when ever that mysterious girl comes. 😉 I like how i’m always the bad guy -.-

  3. did ya know that even though i dun like using potions (when playing maplestory) i still dun die. why wont i die! i died so many times in ur story. not in maplestory! i wanna die! SUICIDE! jkay. taht was really pathetic. =.=

  4. poor mandeh, u gotta read taht really boring book. u showed me it. well, more like typed part of it up, and it made my brain hurt. so much confuzing words! -.-

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