Sides Of Battle 8 COUNTER ATTACK!

Well according to TKPenguin, he thinks i’m lazy with my dialouge so he wants me to write with perfect dialouge -.-. Well on with the story.

The crossbowman stepped out of his hiding place and reloaded another arrow. Jeremy took his bow and an arrow and shot the c-bowman. It had a direct hit, the c-bowman landed on the ground. Jeremy gave a quick smile and said “No problem”. Ken ran to the dead c-bowman. He took the bag off the c-bowman and unbuckled it. He flipped the bag downwards, and a lot of items fell to the ground. The first thing Ken saw were some dirty magezines, and some lipstick? “WHAT THE?!”. They threw those away and kept looking. “UH HAH”, Ken cried. He took a barrel full of arrows, with the avenger symbol on it. Ken tossed it to Jeremy, Jeremy took his old set of arrows and threw them aside, he then put the new set of arrows around his back, “this will come in handy”. Ken quickly took the c-bowman’s headband and tied it around his forhead “Now they’ll think were one of them”.

—————–SteelSin—————–

While Ken and Jeremy (his new found friend) were playing dress-up, Steelsin was called by the other avengers to come to a meeting “they still haven’t noticed i’m a undercover sin?” (noobs). The meeting began, everyone took a seat, except for the soldiers, i guess only the higher ranked avengers get to decide what happens. A man named bl00dnight4 stood up and said they should plan an attack on Ellinia, and another avenger quickly yelled “shut up Ruben”. “I guess hes also known as ruben”, SteelSin took a quick mental note (level 57 cleric, Ruben). Several minutes later the avengers decided to plan an attack on Ellinia. SteelSin had to find Grendel and tell him about this attack. Ruben quickly yelled “The attack will be at dawn”. Everyone nodded and ran off to their tents. SteelSin was shaking. “What do i do”, he thought. SteelSin was runnning out of time, he had 3 hours till the attack. He had no choice, he had to run to Ellinia. SteelSin hasted himself and ran west. He stopped and noticed a fence, it had wires covering the entire fence. SteelSin couldn’t run around it, since it was so wide. SteelSin gave a quick leap and jumped over the fence, a weird noise started to go on and a voice saying “SOMEONE IS LEAVING THE PERIMETER, GET HIM IMMEDIATLEY”. “I must’ve triggered an alarm when i jumped over the fence”, SteelSin thought to himself. SteelSin kept running, he ran and heard some avengers yelling “there he is, GET HIM!”.

SteelSin had to fight, he gave a quick back flip, and landed on a tree branch. A avenger ran by with his level 20 sword. SteelSin leaped down, the warrior shook a bit and screamed a weird battle cry “PIKA!”, the warrior swung his sword madly at SteelSin, SteelSin used his claw to block the strikes. He did a back flip and threw several lucky 7s at the warrior. The warrior tried to deflect some but most of the stars pirced his neck, the warrior fell to the ground, and a Ellinia return scroll fell out of his pokemon backpack. “Woah, its my lucky day”. SteelSin grabbed the scroll and read the encryption on it.

He teleported to Ellinia. He quickly leaped in a bush. Several avengers were guarding Grendel’s house. “Grendel must be in there”. SteelSin planned his attack. He counted the avengers, 1,2,3,4,5,6…… there were 6. SteelSin tightened his slain and put his ilbis in the star slots. “Its time to use these babies”. SteelSin jumped out of the bush and fired 6 stars, the avengers lifted their weapons to shield their faces from the attack. Once they put their weapons down SteelSin had dissapeared. SteelSin ran into Grendel’s home. There stood Grendel all tied up. He was unconcious. SteelSin took a ilbi and slid the ropes apart. “WAKE UP!”. Grendel opened his eyes. “What?”. “ELLINIA’S GONNA GET ATTACKED!”. Grendel quickly responded, “GET THE TROOPS!”.

Grendel quickly stood up and walked up the stairs. SteelSin explained to him what had happened. Grendel quickly ran to a cannon near a window. He focused some mana into his arms, SteelSin was amazed at his power. Grendel formed a bow that appeared to be fire. He then formed an arrow. He put his fire arrow in the cannon and fired. SteelSin looked out the window. The arrow went straight up, it then bursted into flames. “Why’d you do that?”, SteelSin asked. “Its a signal for all the mages around victoria, and the clan leaders to come here”, he answered. A sharp poke pierced there backs. SteelSin turned around, “Uh oh”. It was the 6 avengers he fought with earlier. A assassin stepped towards SteelSin. “Your dead”, he said with a deep voice. The assassin took his claw and star and threw it, everything went in slow motion. SteelSin thought it was all over, everything. But just at that slight second, the star fell to the ground. SteelSin looked around, all the avengers were iced. “Took you long enough”, Grendel said with sarcasm. The mysterious mage answered with a “What ever”. SteelSin stood up. SteelSin gave a quick thanks and asked “Whats your name?”. The young mage turned his head and answered “Steven” (level 55 i/l). “Nice to meet you i’m SteelSi-“, but before SteelSin could finish his introduction Grendel yelled “The mages are almost here!”. SteelSin looked at the sunset, the sun was setting, “there almost here”.

The air went thick. The sky went red. “There here”. The loud chanting of the avengers came nearer and nearer. “Where are those damn mages?!”, exclaimed Grenedel. “Its to late, there here..”, answered SteelSin. An avenger quickly yelled “HOLD YOUR FIRE!”. All the avengers stood still. A avenger walked out, it was Ruben. Ruben had his wand up high, he formed a dark arrow in his hand and fired. “UNLEASH HELL!”, all the avengers took their weapons out of their sheaths, and unleashed their best attacks. Lucky 7, Fire arrow, Magic claw, savage blow, etc….

There were millions of them. SteelSin quickly jumped out of the window, “What are you doing”, Grendel cried. Steven took his wand out of his leather case and jumped out of the window “WOOO!”. Hundreds were surrounding SteelSin, and Steven. The thieves were gonna fire, but just before they could Grendel jumped down and used his thunderbolt. All the avengers around them were burned to a crisp. “100 down 999,900 left, LETS GO!”. Several avengers saw this event and started attacking SteelSin, Steven, and Grendel. SteelSin jumped over them and fired some lucky 7s and ran to another one. He made a fist with his right hand and leaped towards a avenger, he quickly threw a punch, the avenger went flying. Steven used his thunderbolt, most of them fell to the ground. Steven tried another thundebolt, but nothing happened. “Uh oh outta mp”, he dug into his bag for mp pots, not knowing a bandit was gonna pounce on him. The bandit jumped but was shorty noticed by Grendel, Grendel shot a holy arrow, the weak bandit didn’t even know what had hit him. Steven drank his mana and they started fighting.

A few kills later, SteelSin, Steven, and Grendel met back at the middle. “We can’t fight for ever” *huff puff*. They were surrounded by thosounds of avengers. The three of them stepped back, “Its gonna take a miracle to win this….”.

To be Continued…..

15 thoughts on “Sides Of Battle 8 COUNTER ATTACK!”

  1. Yeah keep writing. This one was a lot better, but like your bro said, look for the punctuations and spelling. Keep it up! Oh and don’t take anymore characters; they’re for MY stories!

  2. Your dialogue is a bit messy. You have to start a new paragraph after each line of dialogue.

    Example:

    The air went thick. The sky went red. “They’re here”. The loud chanting of the avengers came nearer and nearer. “Where are those d@mn* mages?!”, exclaimed Grenedel.

    , becomes,

    The air went thick. The sky went red. “They’re here”

    The loud chanting of the avengers came nearer and nearer. “Where are those d@mn* mages?!”, exclaimed Grenedel.

    *in order to avoid being blocked from posting i had to change the spelling. -_-

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