Maple love story (I)

Okay, first PROPER love story for maple.
NO FLAMING PLEASE! THANKS!

A loud annoying sound awoke Jack from his slumber, a small purring/growling sound came from the bottom of the bed,”MUM!! KARGY NEEDS FOOD!!!!”
“Fresh out!!” Screamed his Mum from the kitchen,”BE A SWEETY AND GO FETCH ME SOME FROM THE MARKET!!”
Jack sighed as he pulled his Pao over his head and slipped into his leggings, he loked in the mirror and aligned his LooseCap,”See ya later mum!” he shouted down the stairs as he hopped out his window down through the back garden, looking in his wallet he thought he might go see what he might buy himself.

At the market, a group of Hermits were talking about the Yetis they saw and how they begged for their lives and how they brutally killed ever single one of them,’Disgusting…’ Thought Jack.
After carrying the Kargo feed from the shop, he stopped by some other stalls to examine their wares, he payed close attention to the armor and weapon stalls, after laying his eyes over a iron daggar and a set of Sneak armor, he dug around in his pockets and bought the set, including the Tiberian hat.

“Mum, I’m back!!!” he screamed through the front door, Kargy rushed to his side and begged for the food, as he left for Kargy’s bowl, he saw a Note his Mum wrote, it said:

Dear Jack,
Gone out and will be back later, might bring my friends heom from the academy of Magic,
Love you,
Mother.
P.S: One of their daughtersmight be coming round too!!

Jack thought for a moment, he stared at his old clothes, ‘Back to the market!!’ he mouthed, he filled up Kargy’s bowl.
Back at the market, jack saw a group of people running, it was a group of Orange mushrooms terrorizing the market, Jack drew his daggar and pan lid and run for nearest mushroom, swipping left then right, picking up the money it mugged form the person and returning it, he fought off lots of mushrooms, swiping and slashing and being mashed and bashed, he fell to his knees after the last mushroom had fallen, he looked up at a figure in the market, it was only a mushmom!
Jack dodged left and right of its attacks and he lunged, missed but tried a counter and hit it, minimal damage was dealt,”DIE YOU PIECE OF-” before he could finish his sentance, the Mushmom jumped on top of him, crushing and squeezing air and blood out of him, as he closed his eyes and waited for his Demise, a whoosh and a sound of blod hitting the floor came, he looked up and saw a Chief Bandit holding a dragon’s tail covered in mushroom blood and spores, dropping his weapons he ran to Jack’s side,”You fight well, young rogue, What is your name?” He said as he helped Jack to his feet.
“I’m Jack Taylor!” He exclaimed to his saviour,”if there is anything I can do to repay you!”
The chief bandit looked down on him,”Well, for a start you can call me The Snake, My real name is Christian, but seeing as though im so fast and deadly, they call me the snake,” he explained,”And to repay me….You can join our guild of mercanaries known only as: Lunar.”
Jack pondered for a moment, he looked at the crumpled dead body on the floor,”And you protect this town?” he asked curiously.
“Yes, and we are hired for jobs but we don’t take other people out…” he explained.
Jack examined the body to only reconize it as his mother, Jack’s eyes widened and tears rolled down his cheeks,”Anything to avenge my mother…”
Christian held jack’s shoulder and turned him around and huged him to try to turn him away from the corpse, but Jack just stared at it, hoping for a spinkle of life.

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(+5 good feedback and I’ll make another! ^-^)

15 thoughts on “Maple love story (I)”

  1. omg it was good dude when the cheif bandit hugged him i was dude u should be helping him and u should be making out with him lol jk great story

  2. it was going too fast for me
    like, the pet, then the armor, then the mushmom random appearance
    and he only cried for one paragraph
    it was good, i liked the plot, but seems like a lot for part 1
    maybe its just me
    anyways nice job

  3. it was good, but i kidan have a tip for you if you dont mind =/:

    dont write for feedbacks, but for your own enjoyment. I’ve seen a few people with “gimme __ feedbacks and i will write more, and gimme atleast __ comments.” it’s kinda stupid. i like urs. ur’s pwn mine o__O mine are HORRIBLE =/

  4. Jesus, dude yours are like TEH PWNAGE!11ONEONE 2 mine, i love the sreies etc.
    Just thr feedback thing is so i get the storyline right =3

  5. haha thank you very much shadowsong. do you mind if i add you to friend list? weeeeeeee i write for my own enjoyment =]

  6. Dude i bet you’re those peoplewho cant stop smiling and are insanae and just can’t stop being happy O.o
    Anyway I’ve added you and sorry bout spelling =3

    Random space ^^

  7. weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee i luv smilling =] =] =] =] . =x i better shut up now 😡 lol. . . .

  8. ive seen so many glitches lately
    1)invinible green snail O_o
    2)flying golems
    3)zombie lupins holding a gun O.o
    4)sentinal shooting ice cream

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