Here is Episode 19 of The Maple Story. Hope you like it!
I woke up late to the sound of Patrick and Andy arguing. I walked over towards Amys room because I needed to tell her something.
Amy? You awake yet? I said knocking on her door.
Hello? I said as I peeked in her room.
She wasnt in bed. I walked downstairs to see if she was there.
Hey guys, you seen Amy yet? I asked.
I havent. Patrick answered.
Neither have I, shes probably still asleep. Andy added.
I just checked her room. She isnt there. I told them.
Well check again. Patrick said.
I went back upstairs and went into her room.
Amy, where are you I need to talk to you about something. I asked looking around.
I noticed that her window was open. I walked over and closed it for her and then I noticed a note left on the windowsill.
We kidnapped Amy. Meet me behind the Weapon Store in Orbis. And make sure youre alone, or else.
~You Know Who
I silently debated whether to tell Patrick and Andy. Eventually I decided I should.
Patrick! Andy! I yelled. I found out where Amy is!
Okay then just tell her what you were going to tell her. Andy said.
No! I found this in her room. I said handing Andy the note.
Andy read the note aloud.
No way. What are we going to do now? Andy asked.
Let us go there with Kevin. Ill contact the volunteers. Patrick said seriously.
That might not be the best decision. I said pointing out the last line. You know how much I care about Amy; I dont want anything to happen to her.
Whats going on? Megan asked walking downstairs.
I explained to her the whole story.
Thats terrible! Megan exclaimed.
Were going with Kevin. Dont worry, we wouldnt let anything happen to Amy. Patrick said.
We met up with the other five that wanted to help us and went over to the Weapon Store. Patrick thought it was best for me to stay behind and walk in 5 minutes later. I agreed and the others walked behind the Weapon Store.
I heard arguing and yelling then some screams. I immediately rushed behind to see what was happening.
So you did bring them here! Daniel said bringing a knife near Amys throat.
No please dont! I yelled. Guys stop fighting!
Ah, willing to do anything for this lady now? You can have her. Daniel said shoving her over to me. But come over here, and dont let any of your friends interfere. I challenge you to a rematch. And no cheating like last time.
Alright. I said stepping forward. Guys, dont interfere with me and Daniel, this is our battle.
Same with you guys. Daniel commanded to his friends.
We faced each other, and the battle begun
There it is. Please comment on the story, positive or negative. Thanks.
~You Know Who”
You know, that reminds me of Harry Potter and Voldermort!
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And-
The story, you can insert some emotions in it.
e.g When you found the note, how did you feel? What did you want to do?
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YOU are paterack7!
I was banging my head on my keyboard when you whispered me, trying to figure out who you were!
Anyway .
HIE .
Oh yeah, when I whispered you on MS. You actually recognized my name?
I guess .
My amnesia-raided brain recalled your name from the dark abyss-
Err .
Lets just say-
I remembered you ^^
I’m from a Dark Abyss? T_T
Lol it’s okay,
God, I need more reviews, please?
Umm, sorry I dont give reviews, I BASH YOUR STORY TO PIECES! I mean, I give helpful critisism. =D -walks away-
If you bash his story to pieces. . .
I WILL BASH YOU TO PIECES!
*Shakes heavy hammer*
Thank you Anikabelle.
Perhaps this will do better.
*Gives Anikabelle a heavier hammer*