Aaron stood over the valley in the horizon, cherishing every second, and every strand on his hair that was left unsettled with the somewhat graceful wind….
His memory was starting to fade…
Aaron opens his eyes, looking at that oh so familiar valley, but the smell of burning wood from streets of Henesys too strong for Aaron to remember the Henesys so long ago…
As Aaron trudge through the streets of Henesys, he saw no one at all… as if the whole world abandoned him, like when Aaron had to leave HER, his whole world seems to have went crashing down…
Aaron: Jen…. we need to talk
Jen: yesh hunny? <3
Aaron: …. I think we should meet new people…
Jen: What? Why? =her face showed slight confusion, but it looked a little amused=
Aaron: I have to go… it’s a… guy thing….
Jen: -laughing- i know your kidding Aaron, you always do <3 -beams at Aaron with love and compassion, which made Aaron wince, making this harder to say-
Aaron: I’m sorry Jen… =Aaron deletes his Buddy List, contacts, leaves guild, and runs off, tears streaming down his cheeks, and a hole rapidly burning through somewhere in the middle of his heart=
As Aaron runs, he hears the slight collapse of Jen as she hits the floor…
As the memory takes place in his head, his wound in his heart re-opens, and Aaron bellows with fury, wondering why he left her defenseless… making him feel more guilty
Aaron begins to notice movements in his surroundings…
He begins to worry, fearing it might be THEM… just as that scary though entered his mind, his first instinct shouted at him, RUN…. RUN YOU MORON!!!!
Aaron then replied to the voice, No… no more running…
Just then, a throwing knife was coming at Aaron’s direction, missing Aaron just by near centimeters. As Aaron starts to identify his foe, he notices two things; the foe is inaccurate , and also he / she is not as dangerous then his other encounters…
Meaning, it can be two possibilities…
A dexless sin or a sindit
His foe starts to near him, Aaron sensed it in his bones, knowing if it’s a sindit, he’ll be dead in no time…
His usual steady heart rate increased double over -Aaron was trained to notice his body’s condition- and his senses seem to strengthen…. A darkness purred at the corner of his heart… it taunted him to the little side, the side with more power, the side with the power to eliminate his foe…. but also… his heart
-automated robot- flame shield activated
-downloading version 1.5.6 of flame shield-
Last flame shield got burned to crisp -not in mmotales >.>-
Try to combine the blogs. . . You’ve made 3 blogs today so far, this isn’t called blogging, it’s called spam. A suggestion would be type out your story in a notepad document, the whole thing or maybe large parts of it, and then seperate them into parts. Like Aaron just killed someone and then another stronger guy comes and taunts him, just before the fight scene you could end the chapter to give the readers suspense. A good example would be AznRiceFan’s Lost World/Phoneme series, here link
I reckon it isn’t much of a slight collapse if you ‘hit the floor’. >_O
hmm, good point, thx for the suggestion
P.S. IM AN IDIOT =D
JHK~