This is just a story i wrote for fun. First one eva

One day, there was a teenager, called Ronald. He had dreamed of becoming a very powerful and well-known magician. He had started on a small little island, Pine Island, where there were many people around to help the newcomers. Ronald had started on Pine Island, and was learning many skills he would need before leaving little Pine Island. Ronald had been hunting for snails for the past few days. He had more intelligence than others, and was thus weaker physically than others, and was hurt more easily. He had finally gained three thousand dollars. He had picked them up from snails he had defeated, and had many snail shells. He then went on a trip to go back to his home village. He had found a merchant who had bought his snail shells for some money. When he reached his village, Martin, the man that had taught all the newcomers the basics of surviving, had asked to speak to Ronald. He asked, “Do you feel you are ready to leave Pine Island?” Ronald paused for a second to consider the question. “Yes, I feel that I am ready to leave Pine island and head over to the large island of Victoria.” Martin then said, “head over to port Sarim and talk to victor, he will tell you what to do” Ronald then said his goodbyes to his friends, and walked to port Sarim. When he reached port Sarim, he has noticed a very large boat, and a uniformed soldier with a spear and plate Armour. He then walked over to that soldier, and asked “may I speak with Victor?” the soldier turned, and told him to go to large tent about fifty feet away. Inside, there was a man who wore heavy Armour, with a large helmet revealing only the bottom part of his face. Ronal then said “I was told that you are Victor, and that I ask you what to do to leave Pine Island and head to Victoria Island.” The man then turned to him and said, “Who has instructed you to come to me?” Ronald then replied, “I was told by Martin of my village.” And the man then asked another question, “so you want to leave Pine Island now?” and Ronald replied “yes”. The man then ordered him to pack his belongings and get on the boat. Ronald woke up on the boat about twelve hours later. He saw that he was with many other people that had decided to leave Pine Island. When he exited the boat there was a large man, and he was telling the newcomers to line up single file, and they had all done as he instructed because his size alone was enough to frighten most people.

They had learned that everyone on Victoria Island had to gain a job, rouge, a warrior, an archer, or a magician. The large man said his name was Olaf and he was going to help them choose their jobs. The first person in line walked up to Olaf and was to be asked questions and to be examined. Olaf had seemed impressed by how strong the first person was, he announced, that he be a warrior. The second was later examined, and Olaf asked him to tell him what he saw about a hundred feet away to the north. He replied, “I see a very large statue”. Olaf replied, “you are correct, I advise that you either become a Archer, or if you prefer, use throwing stars.” When Ronald got to the front of the line, Olaf muttered to himself “he isn’t going to be a warrior for sure, he’s far too weak” then Olaf asked him a couple questions, “What is a square root of sixteen,” Ronald thought to himself for a second the replied “it is four”, “you are correct”. Then Olaf asked another question, “What is seven times twelve”. Ronald was sure of this one and replied “eighty-four”, “that’s right”, “Now I advise that you become a magician and learn how to use skills”, then Olaf whispered, “You’re the first smart one out of this bunch” and smiled at him. Ronald was taken to a village in the forest called Ellina. He had to talk to Grendel, at the top of the highest tree. He had finally reached there after climbing many vines. He talked to Grendel, and was told to do a test; he had gotten ninety-three percent on it, and was granted the Job of a Magician. The day was nearing sunset, and they were led to their dormitories. There, were many other magicians, some had powers over healing, some of Ice, and lightening, and there was a single magician, he had the power of fire. He was bunked with the magician of fire, who he later learned was Rick. Ronald had fell asleep right away, and woke up later in the morning when he was called to classes. He had learned the basics of using mana to create an energy bolt, and techniques to recover mana. Two months later. The wizards, the powerful magicians, had been called on a mission to stop a giant Snake in the northern wild lands. But during recess, Ronald had noticed that many of the slimes he was training on to become stronger, were gradually disappearing. But no other people seemed to notice. And during a break in between classes, he had felt the ground trembling for a split-second. After class, they had all gone their separate ways to explore; Ronald decided to go with two to-be healers, Jimmy, and Sean, to explore the dense forest. But while they were eating their extra food they felt an earthquake. They decided to go examine what was causing it. Ronald lost sight of the two for a minute, when they came running back, yelling “KING SLIME”, they had been taught that it was summoned once every few months, with the slimes merging together into one super slime. They were told to not approach one if possible at their level of skill. And they all decided to start running back. But they had gotten lost on their way back, and the slime king was nearing them. Then, they saw the king slime, it was enormous, and was bounding towards them at a furious pace. They decided there was only one thing to do, hide, in hopes of it passing them. They all hid high up in the tress, and Ronald hid in a tunnel under a tree. The King slime was knocking trees down as it came by. But the large slime had seen them a while back, and was knocking down trees in hopes of finding them. But one of Sean had lost his balance on the tree from the earthquake, and did a face plant as he fell onto the soft mossy ground, but the king slime saw him, and was bounding towards him to crush him. But Sean could not hope to outrun the king slime, and Ronald would not just watch as his friend got crushed, and he did the one thing he could do, he created an energy bolt, and fired it at the slime. The slime stopped for a second, and decided then to chase Ronald instead. Ronald then quickly climbed up a tree and tried to hide. Sean quickly got up and went to Jimmy; both of them then started casting their little energy bolts against the gigantic slime. Ronald then tore off a sharp long branch, about three arm’s length, and snuck up above the king slime. He then jumped off the tree, and used as much strength as he could, and plunged the Long Branch deep into the slime. The slime then reeled in pain as the branch had punctured its skin and it was leaking its insides. It then decided to retreat back to heal. But Ronald had landed from too far up and had broke foot as he landed, the two friends tried to heal him, but they were not advanced enough, and had quickly return to their village to seek help. When they had all returned, they were all praised for being brave, and having a great idea to puncture the slime’s outside. A few moments later, a legendary hunter came by, and spoke in a quiet voice, that the hunters had stopped the slime, and had trapped it. A week later Ronald’s foot had gotten better, and he had resumed classes, and was on his way to becoming a strong magician.

well? how do ya think?