Crippling Soul(poem)

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Eh… this is not related to maple. I made another poem and I made sure it rhyme properly.XD
Here goes:

The coldness within my soul
Devouring me bit by bit
Leaving my heart with a hole
How could I escape it?

I must persevere, I must be strong
No way could I let you destroy me.
But everytime something went wrong,
I could feel myself crumble to my knees.

Day and night,
I’m struggling.
Grappling with the fight,
I’m slowly retreating.

I could not resist
To me, you are an enigma
If it’s my death you insist,
I’ll die unoticed from afar.

8 thoughts on “Crippling Soul(poem)”

  4. Hurrah 😀 I love it lol btw, I dont know how to read in rhythm so yeah >>;; i uh had to re read to get the rythm going, AND I KNOW THE RHYTHM, ITS TO THE BEAT OF, “I LIKE TO MOVE IT MOVE IT”

  5. THanks to everyone for complements. Thanks to IndigoLove for the guide. ;p

    ss3jin said: “Hurrah 😀 I love it lol btw, I dont know how to read in rhythm so yeah >>;; i uh had to re read to get the rythm going, AND I KNOW THE RHYTHM, ITS TO THE BEAT OF, “I LIKE TO MOVE IT MOVE IT””

    I like to move it, move it? LOL, I didn’t get my rhythm from that.

  6. LOL, XD

    ss3jin : Hurrah 😀 I love it lol btw, I dont know how to read in rhythm so yeah >>;; i uh had to re read to get the rythm going, AND I KNOW THE RHYTHM, ITS TO THE BEAT OF, “I LIKE TO MOVE IT MOVE IT”

    I tried singing it while reading it. . . but that didn’t work so i gave up XP
    WHY SO SAD?! DON’T DIE UNOTICED!
    btw, really nice poem.o.o” everything ryhmes and it’s so simple but deep, o.o”
    I <3 IndigoLoves guide XD

    – VanillaPocki –

  7. Thanks esteleonin. XD
    I wrote this poem because I was feeling really depressed one night.
    So I lock myself in my room for an hour and a half and wrote this.

  8. Woah, locking yourself for one hour and a half!
    But estelonin is right, so simple but oh, so deep.
    Good Job! Has quite a nice meaning in it.

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