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Sin -Prologue-

Sin: Prologue

Victoria was a country ruled by a secretly corrupt government who wished only to become wealthy and eventually control the entire world. They were constantly self-assured with musings of total power and thought they could be stopped at nothing. While the sheer ignorance, apathy, and blind aggression of their citizens towards each other allowed them a clear path of no defiance, the heads of all the other countries, who knew about the dominant ambitions of Victoria, simply ignored them, knowing that there was no way that their government could ever rule an entire world when they could hardly instill authority among their own citizens. There would have to be a major change in the way that the governors and citizens of Victoria acted before their dream of global domination would ever become a reality. read more

Sin: Prologue

Yeah..I haven’t really been that active lately, and Josh (the dude who writes about echo) said that he didn’t like writing anymore, and I said I wanted him to keep writing…and he said that if I wrote something to then he would have an incentive to continue writing….So yeah….This is what I did (with the help of my friend Alec ofcourse)…..So yeah….Any kind of critisms is welcome….and tell me the stuff I can fix to make this story better…Yeah read more

Number Zero: Prologue

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Well me and my firend Haste(Wsxedcr08) decided to write a story on another forum made by friends from our old school. This is basically the product of our work. We weren’t sure if it was of a good enough quality for your website, but we would appreciate some honest feedback from some of you seasoned writers. BTW we both love Burst… its just an amazing story. This was chapters 1-4 on the forum, but we condensed it because it could be condensed. read more