Nameless Consequence; Part 1, Chapter 1

And so, our story begins…
(Also, Tetsu is a bandit right now, and he starts the story as level 20)

“Tetsu, this is your destiny, the destiny that you have chosen, you, whom destiny has chosen”

“NOOOOOOO!!” I sat up, drenched in sweat. The freakish nightmare I’d had echoed within the bowels of my mind, and I knew I wouldn’t be forgetting it anytime soon. Then I noticed my surroundings.
“Where the h*ll am I!?” “In a safe place,” a teenager’s voice was heard, and soon after, I
saw a shape come forward. “Well, your lucky I found you, you were about to become a wolf’s feast. But anyway, I’m Rei, and he’s Teepo. And to answer you question, this is our ‘home.'”
I was astounded by how Rei and Teepo were living; alone in the woods, both teens with their
own needs. “So, why do you guys live all alone out here?” I asked. “Well…um…” “Yes?” I
was getting impatient for Rei’s answer. “Its because…because….we’re both orphans.” His
answer was startling enough, and when I looked at my own self, I was pretty much an orphan as
well. “Well Rei, thanks for saving me. How did you find me, anyways?” “I was just hunting
when I heard a crash, and when I looked ahead, you were there, sprawled on the dirt–” “Like how was, right Rei?” Teepo cut in.
“Hahaha, yeah Teepo, yeah… OH S***T! I just remembered we have no food left, and with another mouth to feed–” “Don’t sweat it, I hardly eat anything,” I said, even though I was unsure about how much I actually ate.

In town some minutes later…
“Well now, we have to get you some armor, eh?” “Yeah. But Rei, how are you going to get it?”
I felt unsure as to what he might have had in store. “WHY, its the best way; a free-way.” “Oh, okay.”
Rei then went into the store, leaving me outside with Teepo. He looked excited, and clearly expressed his enthusiasm to me; “Hey Tetsu, don’t sweat it, Rei’s got this in the bag… Hey, wait, how did I know your name was Tetsu?” “I dunno,” I said, feeling as confused as he probably did. Before Teepo could say another word, we heard a high-pitched “WHAH-HEE!” “That’s our cue,” said Teepo, and he dashed towards the harvest field. A few minutes later, Rei appeared, and gave me some armor. “So, lets go see whose to be our next ‘customer.'” Rei said. I was not sure of what their “job” was, but I had a pretty good clue…
“And there’s our target, ol’ man Bunyan.” Teepo pointed out. Rei gave me exact directions on what to do; “All we gotta do is ‘bump’ into him, and pickpocket his items. On three. One, two, THREE!”
The next thing I knew, I was knocked out by a huge hand.

[i]”Don’t you see, Tetsu? This is why we cannot live with these kinds of people. They will just
seperate us from the “normal.” That is the hubris of mankind…”[/i]

2 thoughts on “Nameless Consequence; Part 1, Chapter 1”

  1. gah, i gotta fix all the spacing with typos. also, please include anything that you like or don’t like as of right now. thanks.

  2. it’s OK. i really want to know more about this weird voice though. sounds cool.

    oh, but i do think that the space between paragraphs should be done better ( just press enter twice after every paragraph) . its kinda hard to read this way and the dialogue thats all squished together is pretty weird too.

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