Thought of a good story, hope it works.

Jonah started out the tiny barred window of his cell as he looked at his watch again. 6.15pm. He sat down on his bed and rested for awhile before getting up again.Jonah was a lvl 35 bandit, who had a ‘talent’, a useful yet dangerous talent. He could hack into anything. Thats what ended him up in the slammer.He tried his best to be at his best conduct, yet he was bullied by others for being the fourth vegetarian in the whole area. He got a chance at trying to get a new leash of life. “I want to work with computers,” he’d constantly ask. Yet, the only response he got was:” After what you did? No way man.”
He looked at his watch again. 6.17pm. Time sure passed real slow when you’re cooped in a small little room. He looked out his window and saw a little shadow go past the bushes past the trees. ‘Probably a fox or something.” He thought, as he went back to bed. “Sometimes i wish i can be free, roaming around, doing what i want, and…” Before he had finished, he heard some sounds in the corridor. Some…bashing sounds…”Probably some gang fights or something…” thought Jonah as he sat up.
He checked his watch again. 6.1-.” A guard flew past the door of his cell. Jonah stood up, shocked. There was a break in!?!??! What would the robbers want!?!? How did they get in here!?!? Thoughts raced through his mind as another guard flew by. A small black ball followed and smoke spurted out of it. Jonah saw a shadow of the indtruder running up to a guard, jumping on his head, and twisted it 180 degrees. Jonah took a few steps back as he stumbled on his bed. The shadow turned to him and walked towards him. “Who are you!?!?” shouted Jonah as he hid under his bed. “I am… a friend… You can follow me and be saved, or stay here with these bunch of losers. What’s your choice?” asked the shadow as it continued walking…

Everybody stand up, Minata kanda ten daa~~
Minshin unfu wanda
Til Keep you head right up~~
To the sky!
U tona tokiwo…

o.O opps, wrong ending song.
That was it, now i need to recruit some people for the next part of the story. I need 3 guys and 2 girls. Please put in your name and jobs. I appreciate it and many thanks~