my unwilling refusal to play [edited]

There was a boy: at the age of 16; he had been playing MapleStory for quite a while now, not earlier during the day but rather over the months. Recently he has felt the urge to play but, rather than going on, been averted and my attention been drawn elsewhere.

He has even logged-on on an account for a very short period of time and started a new character to try to renew his drive for playing, but to no avail. Perhaps the issue is the diversity of activities to participate in other than the game, perhaps the lack of time and effort to enjoy the game, perhaps the lack of time with balancing school and work.

He just has no solutions so he turns to you and asks not what he can do for you, rather what you can do for him. Help find a cure for the cause.

Note: Despite the creativity in my writing, the point was to illustrate my frustration with my situation and to ask for good advice to resolve this problem, as well as receive feedback on my writing and dilemma. Thank you.

9 thoughts on “my unwilling refusal to play [edited]”

  1. You really get emo out of it?

    I am no where near emo, I skate and have a life that is quite enjoyable. The only reason it might have come off that way is if you were overwhelmed by the language and misunderstood it or did not understand that it was meant to be creative (in the case that emo kids make the same “style” blogs).

    Not very helpful suggestions by the way -_-

  2. WoodNinja said: “
    Not very helpful suggestions by the way -_-“

    Well, the content of your blog doesn’t explain much. Basically: it makes no sense. I suggest rephrasing it entirely in order for us to understand it.

  3. Fixed, sorry for the massive load of commas and thoughts crammed in butI really wanted to make you work a little for it.

    Wow, emo people creep me out, if anything I would be considered a prep who just likes to skate.

  4. Your constant switching between first and second and third person is screwing with my brain!

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