Journey of a Hermit – Chp 5 1/2

Well I’m putting all my heart and story into this particular story… So.. YOU BETTER LIKE IT! xD..
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This women slowly recovered from our fall. She turned her head and faced me directly. Tears started to well down her eyes… It was Angel.
“No…..” she softly whispered in guilt. Angel regretfully pushed me back so she could get up and run.
Her soft hands on my chest reminded me of the great memories we use to share. We always stuck together holding eachother when frightened or scared. Even in fights we still loved each other. No matter the situation, we always loved eachother.
Time seemed to be slower when I was thinking about her. The world seemed to stop for me, whenever I thought about her.

I started to get back to reality and chase my loved one. I stood up courageously wiping the mud of my clothes, then I hasted myself and ran up to find her.
“ANGEL!!!….”, I cried out, “ANGEL????”
I saw a white figure trying to distance away from me. It was obviously Angel, I thought. But it wasn’t. It was a homeless white bunny.. Alone in the woods. It looked famished! “Time is of the essence!” I thought. So I quickly grabbed my special unagi from Rina, and fed it to the bunny. The bunny munched in delight.
“I have to go now, little bunny” I said smiling. I ran off to look for Angel. I ventured deeper into the woods thinking of where she could be. The woods were vast, it could possibly take me years to find her.
The sun was setting and my time to find her was running out. I had to hurry.
“I don’t want to lose her again” I cried. Hours had passed. Angel was no where to be seen. My heart dropped all the way down to my legs. Something was lurking in the darkness looking for me. Angel? No…. Something much bigger! The bushed and trees rustled even more. Huge white ears popped out.
Was this a Lycanthrope? A legendary beast that is said to be seen only in full moons, and cold temperatures.
Nothing to worry about, the moon isn’t fu- I glanced upward. Great. Come to think of it, it was getting chilly to!
2 red eyes glared at me ready to pounce. Oh my god, I thought. I’m gonna die! But why now! I need to see my Angels face again!
I closed my eyes in fear hoping I would have a quick and painless death. Then I felt something crawling on me. Something as soft as silk. I opened my eyes, expecting to see a head of a Lycanthrope, but it was the bunny again. It followed me everywhere now. Just staring at me with those beady red eyes. Cute. Maybe I should keep it as a pet!
I played with it for a few seconds lying down. Then above I heard leaves rustling. Angel fell down and fell between my legs. Yes, it hurt a lot. I held my eyes shut, trying to keep in the pain. Well, atleast I didnt have to search for her.
“Oooohhh….” Angel mumbled apologetically. She tried to run away, but my right arm seized her left leg and she tripped. I crawled closer to her. She turned, back to the ground and then I lay on her body and starting kissing her.
“Angel.. Don’t leave me again.” I managed to say while kissing her. “I’m more hurt when you leave me…Than getting hurt when I’m with you.”
She started softly touching my body and unzipping my shirt… I slowly started kissing her neck. I could have swore the bunny said..”Humans..”

We walked out of Henesys together.. Holding hands. I explained that over the time she left me I had become more ill. I had finally convinced her to stay with me. Forever. I told her that I was a lot stronger than last time, for I was about to become a Hermit! I also told her about the new bunny I found!

I told her we were going somewhere for a surprise. I put a piece of cloth on her eyes. She took it off and she saw the sign that read, “Ellinia Station”.She was shocked.

“Are you ready for our postponed trip to Orbis?” I said smiling.

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I could only write half of this chapter today, because I’m gonna go watch a movie with my family!!!
:DDDDDDDDD. I’ll release the next halk tomorrow!!!

But for now, I hope you like this one..

Please critisize, comment etc.

See ya!

5 thoughts on “Journey of a Hermit – Chp 5 1/2”

  1. -.-, wow this story sure has a lot of you “know wut”, o yea wut happened to the Lycanthrope -.-, didn’t make much sense, but nice!

  2. That’s, really, clichéd, and not really PG, and, kind’ve creepy. I’m sorry, I just really don’t enjoy mindless love stories like this.

    If you want to make a good story, try adding depth to the character! Just having two characters with memories and love doesn’t make enough for a good story. Explain something besides their love-sickened bond for each other, unless you’re reading those $1 love novels, there needs to be more.

    ~Mip

  3. lol thanks Mip I
    l’ll take your advice into consideration, but you’ve got to understand, that loving some one so dearly is part of his personality. If you’ve read the chapters before, he has no one to live with or anything. Until he met his brother, he loved Angel because he didn’t have anyone to be with.

    And, the lycantrope, there wasn’t one, he thought there was one. It was just the bunny.

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