I created this story based on my Assassin that’s close to becomming a Hermit. This is only it’s beginning, so I just want other people’s opinion about it.

Kuroishinobi
(The Dark Ninja)

It was one stormy night when it happened. . .

After consulting with Arec of El Nath, Kuro (Kuroishinobi) had returned to his apartment of El Nath satisfied that his hard work had finally paid off. He had finally became strong enough to take on the next level in the way of the Assassin.

He entered his bedroom where he undressed himself to take a shower. After drying himself up, he put on his Dark Stud set and his snowshoes. He then combed his hair and put his Dark Identity helmet on. Afterwards, he put on his work gloves, equipped his new Dark Scarab, and re-equipped his dark Napolean cape.

“It’s my turn to become a Hermit.” Kuro said. He then left his apartment and leaped from the 18th floor of the building down onto the sidewalk. He absorbed the shock wave of the fall and dashed on over to the Fusion Bar.

When he entered the Fusion Bar, there was a weaker thief who didn’t seem to like him. He boldly walked up to him.

“Hey you stupid noob, no ametures allowed! Now give me all your gear before I kick your a-!”

Just before the weak thief finished what he was saying, Kuro grabbed him by the collar and chucked him at a shelf filled with wine and sake bottles. Everyone in the bar started starring at Kuro. “Anyone else who has somethin smart to say will end up like that guy.” Kuro said. Everyone quickly went back to their business.