3 thoughts on “the fairy tale end with a little cave”

  1. UGGHHHHH. I’m sorry but that was disgusting. Not the story but how you type. Use some periods and CAPITALS. I didn’t even read it.

  2. ok i was trying to read it, and i found out there was no periods or commas, i ran out of breath!

  3. Apologies.
    I was trying to read it, but I found myself confused by the lack of periods and commas.
    Plus, there were no breaks in the paragraphs, so it turned out to be a confusing block of text.

    To be honest, it’s starting to give me a head ache. Please make your story a bit more organized

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