The assassin charged once more, this time at heartcandiie. The ladies attacked too, heartcandiie shot out an arrow with dynamo powder at the tip and the priest chanted a spell. The spell activated with a mystical claw ready to slash the assassin. But their attackes were of no avail. The assasssin cut the arrow with his stars which exploded behind and dodged the slashing claw easily.
He knocked heartcandiie out, caught the priest in his arm and took her away. When heartcandiie woke up, her friend was already gone….
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yes i noe its short but plz bear w’ it kk? cos my ****ing brother keeps insistin tat a short cahpt’s gd k?
not bad but ADJECTIVES! hello adjectives! you nid those
Then your brother is a doofus.
Too short ain’t good.
Too long and you’ll see people falling asleep.
just a few paragraphs with more adjectives.
Can you PLEASE put the 2 together.
This is just 2 paragraphs, not a chapter
erm, fine next time you’d written a blog, call me, e.stranger,i’ll be a critic for you
whoa. whose mr number nickname?
First:
This is not a blog, this is a story
Sure, criticize me all you want.
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You gotta admit that this “story-in-a-blog” is way too short.
C’mon, two paragraphs? Even my 5th grade speech was longer than this (No offense Will)
Merging them together to make ONE chapter is better!
For example, SilverFx, she writes her stuff short enough to not get boring and long enough to keep interest.
This is just too short