The Prophacy ~ Final

(the charactors in this story have no relation to ones on Maple Story excluding NPCs)
(this story never happened and as far as you know is my dream)

[Victoria Island, December 2008, Ellinia]

The ships arrived at the station,
the biggest one docked. The warriors
had their weapons ready, the Balrogs
would swarm the station at any momment.
A man in a black robe walked out the ship.

One of the Heroes stepped up and shouted. “What the h*ll is this?! A human
aboard Balrog ships?! Die traitor!” He ran out and swung his Devil’s Sunrise.
His attack was stopped, A Fairfrozen spear was stabed through his body, the
man didn’t even care to take out the spear, he just left it in his body as
he fell toward the ground. The man in the black robe walked toward the army
of warriors. He gave a signal and thousands of Balrogs swarmed out of their
ships and started the bloodshed. Balrogs slashed through them like they
were nothing, they begun to charge dark magic and formed it within a sphere.
From there it only got worse, the entire army was wiped out in minutes.
The man in black carried on out the station and was almost hit by a holy
arrow. “Holy s*it what are you doing! It’s a fellow man weapons down!
what is the situation soilder?” The man in black laughed while he gave
a very fammilier signal. The doors flew open and the Balrog’s Dark sphere
attack were flying everywhere killing at least a quarter of the magician
army. Fashex was a Fire/Poison Arch Mage, He was killing many Balrogs but
the bulk strength in the army were the Clerics and up, the Crimson Balrogs
were weak to holy light. Soon a fammilier voice was heard by all. “So Fashex?
Can you still handle it?! CHIMERA BUSTER!” Tsumekia charged and sent his attack
toward the station killing many Balrogs that were still entering Ellinia.
The man in the black robe signaled to cancel the attack.

The man spoke. “Always acting like a hero Tsumekia.” Tsumekia was shocked.
“No, Thats not possible.” Fashex was confused.”What are you talking about
Tsumekia? Who is this guy?!” Tsumekia was about to speak but the man spoke first.
“Did you really think these idiotic monsters could handle a war without
a ruler? They’re too stupid for that. You must be Fashex, second in command
for the mages. Allow me to introduce myself, I am Arcane former Dragon Knight
and second in command for the warriors.” Tsumekia jumped down from where he was
and was as confused as he ever could be. “Why would you want to kill your fellow
humans? What type of glory could it behold?” Arcane took down the hood of his
robe, the sight of his face was horrifying. He had ancient markings all on his
face and had a pure yellow eye. “To become a god” he said. “But Arcane! That
is just a myth!” Tsumekia shouted. “What else is it my dear friend?” Arcane
said calmly. “A” Tsumekia stopped then went on. “Prophacy.” “Yes my friend.”
Arcane said. “And as said in the Prophacy, I need someone that could amount to
have the powers of a god, and I need to kill him. This is the end my good friend.
No happy endings in this story!!!” Arcane shooted off wielding a omega spear while
Tsumekia stood there preparing all his strength for battle, Arcane commenced
Buster but Tsumekia quickly dissapeared and threw his Fraute at Arcane. A direct
hit to the back! To make sure it didn’t become a propblem Tsumekia said it early.
“I don’t care the surcomestances don’t join in the fight! This isn’t your fight.”
Fashex spoke. “But Tsumekia! we—” Tsumekia interubbted him. “No! Stay away!”
Arcane quickly dashed to Tsumekia and performed Buster again. Still a miss and
Tsumekia dissapeared again. “OMEGA BOOSTER!” Suddenly powerful light surrounded
Tsumekia and made a thin aura around him. Arcane dashed toward him and like always,
performed Buster. The strange light surrounding Tsumekia blocked every blow and
seemed to blast Arcane away. “Augh, What? That was power guard! But I didn’t inflict
any damage on him!” Tsumekia grinned. “Got you now. Goodbye old friend.” He picked
up his Fraute. “DRAGON JAB!” He charged his sword and struck his sword toward Arcane
and sent a powerful arrow of light again. The arrow went straight through Arcane. Blood
spewed from the hole in his body. He had some last words that Tsumekia respectfully
listened to. “Amazing, maybe you are already a god. I gained one single power within
me, the deal was, that if I would lead the monsters to victory. They would give me their
soul, I have control of their lives. Once they killed everyone, i would kill them. Then
be the god to this planet and create my own lifeform. But now, I must relieve this world
of dirty monsters and make forever peace.” Tsumekia spoke. “No, can you Imagine our world
without monsters? Human wars would break out.” Tsumekia winked. “just kill the
Crimson Balrogs.”

[Ossyria Island, July 2034, Zakum summoning room]

“Zakum, arise to your master, Kain.”

Please comment on if you enjoyed or hated this part.
Well? Did I do well? Yeah yeah, leavin you with one last storyline plot.
I will be continuing this story in a diffrent one alright? That will take
a while too. Anyway can you PLEEEEESE If you read this can you comment? i’ve
had my last few ones have no one liking them and not saying why they didn’t
enjoy reading it. T_T ~ Tsumekia ~ ^_^

3 thoughts on “The Prophacy ~ Final”

  1. Once again no one listens to me, I need comments to improve on what you didn’t like!

  2. Man, tt’s nice. You need to correct ur spelling mistakes though. Put the whole thing in Word and check if there’s any spelling mistakes.

    Plus, it’s kinda chunked up as a paragraph. You need to do a bit of phrasing.

    And where do those moves come from? Haha, Did you come up with it urself, or are they really the skills of a F/P Archmage?

    I’ll b back in a few weeks to comment on ur other stories. Hope to see the corrections done.

  3. , there skills i came up with myself of course, i’ll try and make it into more paragraphs if it helps ^_^

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