Love Frozen in El Nath Part.4

My mind blank my body sore, all I hear are voices in my head.

“Are those two ‘ok’
“I hope so, isn’t this the she the one people talk about in El Nath?”

Me- “Ungg”

“Oh she spoke!”

I tryed to move but nothing happoned. I began to hear this familier voice, something I heard befor something warm about his voice…

I blacked out again yi’ll thenext morning, trying to feel mt forehead until I hear those voices again, but not that warming voice.

“Oh shes moving! are you ‘ok” I replied slowly “I don’t know, where am I?” The mysterious voice replied as I moan still exhausted.

“Your in the hidden city, oh yes your friend Nekoshi said to be strong”

“Nekoshi…Where did he go?” I asked impatiantly.

“He went to get herbs for you left shoulder”

I rolled over on my ight shoulder as I feel a sharp pain in my left shoulder, I rubbed it slowly until I relized… I had no clothes on!

“Eeeiyaaa!!” I screamed loudly as I cover up more in the blanket while my eyes wide open watering until Nekoshi comes in all suprized to what happoned, “Eh, whats going on?”

He told me how where in some hidden city and how the locals took care of us. I appologized for screaming and began to question Nekoshi.

“who was that other person in herem I reconized his voice somehow”

Nekoshi answered “Who? I wasn’t here then”

I sighed sadly wondering on mind who that was. Nekoshi andme explored the city, helping the people and looking for Cjeey.

“Hey hows your arm” Nekoshi asked.
“It’s ok no worries, I guess.” The herbs you got me are great.
“Oh well i’m sorry for putting you in pain” He looked so sorry..

“no,no,no,no,no…. I’m fine”

We walked by a temple and read the sign that says if one confesses there love here they will love eachother forever, so we went in to explore.

I gasps in amazment as I imagine Cjeey confessing his to me “Aww, sigh”

“Hey,I didn’t reallly get your name” Nekoshi budding into my Fantasys.

“Oh yes, my name is Tsukkie” I replied shyly.
“I see well Tsukkie-chan I have a confession. I, I like you. No. Love you! Tsukkie-chan I love you!”

I turned all red turning away. “W,Why me. We been together for no that long.”

“No, what I been through was enough for me to love you!
He holds onto my hands inching closer.

“N, no… I’m still inlove with Cjeey and I will aways will be”
I looked at him determained for my love Cjeey and only him.

“he’s gone and not coming back, Tsukkie please be with me”
He inches closer looking into my eyes s out lips almost met.

:NO! he’s not gone, even is he was I’ll still love him!”
Streams of tears came down from my eyes as I shook my hands loose from his and began to run, run as fat as I can…

“What do I do now?”

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I’m very sorry for anyone who thinks i’m going to go on ti’ll like chapter 7 or 10 but i’ll be stopping at chapter 5. OR NOT!

Ny’ahhaha

Stay tooned, I already have chapter 5 ready. But i’m late for art class. BYE! <33

15 thoughts on “Love Frozen in El Nath Part.4”

  1. um, what happend in the other chapter’s? do I have to read all of them? can’t you just summarize it for me plz?

  2. haha. this sotry is basically. . . (dont take this as critism but i cant help making the joke)

    naked woman+guy loves her+she cries

    *shrugs*. it wass a totally good story. ch 3 a kinda confusin i hav to admit though.

  3. *Kills your critism*

    Oh yes, Xiaolshi is me. But you call me by Tsukkie. Since that’s my new main in Broa.

  4. Nope, I told everyone I’m fixing all my other chapters befor I release it.

  5. err about that part you’re naked -.- thats a little crazy u know. u said that nekoshi came in and he did not noticed u were naked? O.o> and u didn’t say anything else about it anymore. from my point of view i think u should cancel away the part where “i had no clothes on”

  6. Tsukkie said: “Nope, i’m in a blanket. Woot~

    Your thinking of Sam. Lol!”

    AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH BLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEH WHAT DID SAM DO TO A NAKED WOMAN! UGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGH EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEH BLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEH I GOTTA CALL SAM! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH. and yur naked in a room–alone– with a boy that loves you. that wont lead to anything good o__o

  7. NOOOO I’M NOT A SLUT!
    TT_TT

    I’LL KILL YOU LIKE I SAID EARLIER!

    Ny’ahha!

  8. *gets chased by Tsukkie, who’s holding a knife* AAAAAAAAAAAAAH HELP ME! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH *hastes away* =]

  9. Lol nice story, but how the heck are you going to end it in one more chap? It probaly has to be loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooong

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