Love Frozen in El Nath P.1 (Fixed)

This started all when I was a beginner I was doing not so well in Maple Island with the snails as I see a orange mushroom pop out from the tomato bush.

I gasp in fear highly of my death is come near until a brave beginner swept in front of me doing amazing damage in my eyes, watching him exhausted but amazed of him.

I began to say “Thank you so much, I’m Tsukkie. May I ask for your name?”
To him it was nothing as he replied “It’s nothing, you can call me Cjeey”
But I fallowed him everywhere. We trained together and left Maple island. We gained our jobs, I was a mage to become a Cleric so I can be by his side forever. And so he became a Thief throwing his amazing stars.

I fallowed him everywhere as we trained and we travailed all around Victoria gaining our strengh while we level together. We travailed until years pass gaining our second job advancement. I finaly became a Cleric and he an Assassin.

We kept on travailing as I stayed behind him healing and fighting. More years pass by until we where level 50 as my love grew more.

We started to head to El Nath while we where in Orbis tower. heading out to the cold snow I shivering tremendously until he covers me under his left arm and his Napoleon cape. I blushed all red and we walked on an he took the cape off and went a few steps forward as we faced a small cute Yeti as he takes it out in two Lucky seven of his amazing steelys.

We began climbing a mountain as we get so high that the forest of snow covered trees looked so small as we came to the top and began to walk, I asked “Hey mister will you be mine?”
As he replied “Tsukkie-chan how long has it been, 3 years that you fallowed me?”
Me- “I will fallow you to the end even if it kills me”

We saw another cute Yeti. but the thing is, when my Love took out his Steely the Yeti became Huge!!

I gasp in fright as it creeps closer until it puts both of his arms up and began to strike. At that moment he grabbed me and jumped while the ground shook rapidly. He jump and throws his Steelys many times ti’ll the Yeti is now weak. It began to do a final strike an he reaches for his Kunai case but nothing was there!

My eyes opened widely while he runs and pushes me back until the Yeti strikes!
He get hit by the massive earthquake as he falls over the cliff. I sceamed at him calling “CJEEY!!!” as streams of tears fall down my face, I look over the exhausted Yeti and screamed mustering all my Magic power into an Arrow and fired it disintegrating the Yeti as I ran beside the cliff yelling his name. But nothing replyed, only the cold wind blowing against my face.

I headed to El Nath alone with streams of tears down my face as all I have of his was this Dark Napoleon on my back as I journeyed upon the land of where he has disappeared and so I whisper upon my self.

“Cjeey where are you?”

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I cleaned it out more so I guess i’ll be fixing all of them Heehee…

12 thoughts on “Love Frozen in El Nath P.1 (Fixed)”

  1. one thing o__O. fallow is spelled “f-o-l-l-o-w”. besides that, most of the errors are kinda gon

  2. lol i like you used me for the whole story ^^
    im a bandit though. but im fine as a sin
    keep up the good work

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