three tombs part two (spelling is fixed)

Chapter two: the trip

By the time they were on the ship something strange happened…there was an elf that peered out of a bush, it seemed to be stuck there, they felt sorry for it but they were already on the ship, then all of a sudden the engine went out of control and a luggage rack fell on Athena,
It also snapped a wire which electrified threshel. And when they woke up they realized they were on florina beach! There was a guy named biggs who would take them to Victoria if they’d give him some banana’s!

Capter three: Victoria (sorry about the mix up)

One thought on “three tombs part two (spelling is fixed)”

  1. LOL
    good editing! Very nice. Apart from your story that needs to be longer, it’s good. i like the picture the best haha

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