Chapter two: the trip
By the time they were on the ship something strange happened
there was an elf that peered out of a bush, it seemed to be stuck there, they felt sorry for it but they were already on the ship, then all of a sudden the engine went out of control and a luggage rack fell on Athena,
It also snapped a wire which electrified threshel. And when they woke up they realized they were on florina beach! There was a guy named biggs who would take them to Victoria if theyd give him some bananas!
Capter three: Victoria (sorry about the mix up)
LOL
good editing! Very nice. Apart from your story that needs to be longer, it’s good. i like the picture the best haha