The story begins at Victoria.
The character’s name is Swat ( yes I know, odd but that’s my IGN )
The story begins as he is making his 2nd job as a lit mage.
Anyways, here is the story.

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It was a beautiful day with the sun shining and the birds chirping and flying about.
I was on my way to Ellinia from Henesys to go see the so called “King of all Mages”.

“Wow, I sure did pick an excellent day to get my second job advancement” I said to myself.

As I made my way to Grendel The Really Old, I paused in amazement.
There in my sights was the girl I liked sitting on a bench alone.

“Should I go accompany her?” I whispered to himself.

Just then the girl stood up walking straight to me.

“Hey swat!” shouted the girl.
“Oh hi Diana.” almost mumbling the words as he spoke.
“How long has it been since I’ve seen you?” she asked.
“I don’t know, maybe about 1 month.” I answered.

As she was about to speak, she saw someone in the far distance.

“Got to go!” she yelled as she ran off.

Since I did like her I thought about following her.
Although that may seem like a stalker thing to do, I went anyway.
As I was following her I stopped. I thought about what I was doing and it just didn’t seem right. I turned around and started walking back to the taxi. I handed the driver a sack containing about 1,200 meso. It seemed like forever until finally we arrived in Ellinia.

“Thank you!” I shouted as the taxi driver drove off back to Henesys.

I climbed from tree to tree, branch to branch just trying to make it to the top.

“Darn Grendel, why did he have to choose a place filled with trees to start a town.” I whispered while trying to pull myself up a rope.

When I finally arrived at the top, I stared wondering why the place seemed a lot less smaller then when I last came here. I walked up to the door and knocked.

“Come in” shouted a voice that sounded old and worn out.

I entered the gigantic house and took off my shoes to show respect.
I sat down on a bunch of boxes, since there didn’t seem to be a single couch.
“Very roomy.” I thought.
Just then a gleam of light surrounded me and I seemed to have gained powers.
I wondered why I had already become an ice/lightning wizard without having to finish that quest of his.

“Don’t worry, you didn’t have to finish the quest I usually assign.” Grendel said as he floated down the stairs.

“You are far stronger then anyone that has made his job advancement in the past.”

Just then I heard a scream of pain out in the city.
I recognized that voice, it was Diana.

I quickly added my extra skill point into teleport and rushed off into the woods.
When I arrived I stared in shock that one of my arch rival was hitting Diana.

“Justin, what the heck are you doing?” I shouted.

“Well, well, just as I planned.” said Justin as a huge grin came upon his face.

“Leave her alone Justin.” I shouted with anger.

“Why don’t you come here and make me?” said Justin with the smile still on his face.
“Or are you too weak to protect your little girlfriend over here.”

Just hearing this made me angry. I quickly took out my wand and ran over to cast magic claw.
In a blink of an eye, Justin took out his bow and lunged it into my stomach. I fell to the ground almost unconscious. I could still hear the sounds of Diana yelling in the background. Just then it stopped.

“If you ever want to see her again, I suggest you find me at Sleepywood tonight.” he whispered into my ear.

With that, he took off into the air taking Diana with him.

To be continued…

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Tell me if I have to improve on anything and also tell me if I should continue or just stop.