The Road of a Maple Magician, Part 2

I am now a Magician! I have the power of Energy Bolt. I quickly went to the shop. I bought something that the Lady said was in style. The tacky looking Training Set. As I exited the store, I think I wasted all my money…… GOODNESS! I went to go buy a stick! I exited the city and looked for a monster to show my powers to. I found this tree stump. It seemed to be an OK thing, but as soon as it stung me when I bumped into it, I knew it was a battle. I released my newly learned attack on this Monster of Splinters. To my surprise, it didnt die. I repeatedly launched my Energy Bolt and it finally died. The remains of this monster was a stick, and a few coins. After a period of time, killing these Slime creatures and Tree Stumps, I felt VERY tired. I was in the middle of a battle with this Green Slime when, suddenly, I COULDNT ATTACK! This beast went straight for me, and suddenly I felt very light-headed and my stomache had a sudden burst of pain. This horrible monster had it’s slimy body grasped me and it felt like an ocean of acid went into my body. I found myself in Ellinia again. I felt a bit weak, but I was alive. I guess the citizens carried me back. I saw other people laughing. A man in in a Circlet was laughing at me! The man with the Gold Crown pointed at me and called me a Noob. Still full of wonder of how I got to the city, how come i couldnt cast anymore magic, and what a “noob” was, I collapsed on the soft grass and fell asleep.

This is my Part 2. Part 3 is soon to come , comment on this one and tell me if you like this. if you all do, then i’ll go on

2 thoughts on “The Road of a Maple Magician, Part 2”

  1. Lovely. it took me a couple of minutes, then the whole day of thinking how to review your work.

    Paragraphing.

    Some people’s eyes hurt when they see a big clump of text together. Try putting lines inbetween a few important sentences in future releases, that way it will be easier to read. =)

    have fun making your stories XD

  2. I love the way you portrayed yourself depleting your MP. Very original, and very interesting. Hurry and get part three up. =P

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