Yay! My second part of my first story! (btw ima start posting these stories like at 5 pm PST usually XD well somewhere around 5pm PST >.>) Dun forget to write CONSTRUCTIVE critism >=D Oh no… I gotta write PERFECT now T.T bleh that sux XD well anywayz heres the last part of the first part of The Black Angel, Part 1 so u dun have to look bak on it, unless u didn’t read the first part, which u should ALWAYS do b4 u read the next part >=D it’s how u stay unconfuzzled! =D

“HELP!!! HELP!! UGLY GIRL COME HERE AND RESCUE ME!!” I heard the guy I met first before yell out to me. “I PROMISE I WON’T CALL YOU UGLY!!” I thought to myself, should I, or should I not..? I knew there was a girl behind me, so was it really worthwhile to save a guy that says to me I’m ugly?

You don’t know what’s special until it’s gone

Huh? What was that I thought.

Must be nothing, and so I continued to decide…

Really, you don’t remember me?

And on with the story ^^

“Oh my gosh… ugh.. What’s going on…?” I said slowly as I woke up. I had a huge headache and I couldn’t stand up.

“Hey, she’s back guys!” A girl told. I noticed that I couldn’t see her because my eyes were fogged up and all I could see were blurs of dark mixes of colors, but I could see that she was a magician, like me, and that two other people were approaching me, forming a circle around me.

“Well she didn’t come back from the dead, that’s for sure, even though she looks like she did,” Someone said. Wait.. I know this voice.. It’s that evil Mr. Bald guy!

“Watch it Baldy! It’s not her fault she fainted!” I heard from the girl. My eyes were finally clearing, and she looked like a level twenty-eight mage, seeing that we had the same outfit almost, though hers wasn’t purple, it was blue.

“Pfft, mages are always so weak! They can’t do anything practically, and besides, us men are SO better than you weak girls!” I heard ‘Baldy’ say, and that just used up my last string that attached to my self-restraint part of my brain. I stood up so fast that my headache, which was gone just before Mr. Bald said that us mages were weak, came back, and my eyes started to blur again, so I collapse back on the ground.

“Oh my god! Are you okay? Don’t stand up yet, you’re too tired right now to kill Baldy yet!” the girl exclaimed to me.

“It really isn’t her fault anyways Baldy. Lay off of her, she looks determined to kill you.” I heard someone say to ‘Baldy’ in a sarcastic way.

“Ugh.. Just tell me who you guys are and where I’m at.” I said exhaustingly.

“You’re at Henesys. And sorry that we didn’t tell you our names first. My name is Jean, the guy over there (points to the bald warrior) is Baldy, and the one over there (points at the other guy) is Kerry.” Jean told me.

“Yup! Don’t forget, Kerry is the fat guy, and I’m the nice guy!” Baldy said.

“If I’m fat, then your stupid. Your neck is bleeding by the way Baldy.” Kerry exclaimed to Baldy. As Baldy was wiping his neck clean of his own blood and arguing to the guy named Kerry, I wondered what happened just before I blacked out.

You don’t know what’s special until it’s gone…

What did I lose…?

Really, you don’t remember me?

Who don’t I remember…?

My thoughts were jarred when someone came behind Jean. It was a thief. Wearing a dark burglar hat, a Black Pao Set, and a Meba, he came walking in. He’s probably a sin-to-be then, I thought, and most sins are bad news! So I got up again, this time without falling back, and used magic to create a fire arrow. I let go of the arrow and it was flying at the sin. The sin, which was surprised by my attack, barely got away. Unfortunately I didn’t here the screams of the other people around me saying not to fire at the sin…

“Dam girl! I’m a friend! Jeez, nice friend you have their guys,” The sin said, touching the part of his hair that I burnt with my fire arrow. Wait, what? I’m not their friend yet! But I was too tired to care. That fire arrow took a lot from me, so I sat back on the same rock I was sitting on yesterday. I kept thinking about the friend I had a long time ago, and those mysterious two phrases… oh well.

A couple of minutes passed by, in which I watched the birds chirp in this little peaceful town, where I guess the bowmen train, because I see an awful lot of bowmen wandering around and opening the doors of oversized mushrooms. I mean, how the hell do people live in those houses?! Well at least when they run out of food, they can always eat their house I thought. Oh, wait, didn’t I burn somebody’s hair…?

“Oh, Sorry.. umm.. who are you?” I started.

“It’s Zachary, Zak for short,” he answered for me.

“Well sorry Zak, thought you were a bad guy, but I guess fire wizards and sins are judged way too quickly,” I apologized.
“It’s alright! Anyways, why are you here?” Zak asked.

“Hey! How about you Zak? Why are YOU here?” Baldy asked with a hint is jealousy in his voice. Maybe because Zak stole his spotlight I guess.

“Why can’t I join your little party?!” Zak exclaimed.

“Because,” Baldy started, “You’re annoying! You’re as annoying as… hey, what’s you’re name girl?” He was pointing at me.

“Oh, my name is Christi, and to answer your question Zak, I’m here because…” I started to talk about how I got here, how I disgraced my family by becoming a fire wizard, and that I’ve been traveling for a couple of days, but I was starving already. I did leave out the stuff that I never want to talk about ever again.

[i]Sucked into eternal darkness…
Why do you want to forget about me?
Is it because our family told you I had disgraced them?
If you believe our family, you might as well never left.
But you did…that already proves you’re ready.[/i]

“Hey Christi, are you okay? You look kind of, weird…” Jean said, as I snapped out of my thoughts.

“I’m fine.”

“Are you sure? You look like you’ve been hit by a car…”

“Yea…I’m fine.”

“Well, if you want, we can be your next family! Like your second family.. Or something..” Jean proposed. To bad I couldn’t answer her.

All of a sudden, something hit me from the back. I didn’t see it, but everyone shouted out, “OH MY GOD, A LUCIDA!! WHY THE FUDGE IS IT HERE?! RUN, RUN, RUN LIKE THE WIND PEOPLE!” But I was too late, and it used a magic attack that sent me flying into the sky…

————————————-Author’s Notes———————————————-

Christi- what?!?! IM SENT FLYING INTO THE AIR? THAT IS SO NOT COOL! and wuts all this fudge..?
Me- Uhuh, and guess wat? It gets worse for ya >=DDD
Christi- HAI U DUN CONTROL MY LIFE! (Tries to take away my keyboard)
Me- HAI NO U DON’T… (oh my god I’m so bored im talking to myself XD

fact: a lucida is a monster in maplestory (stooopid baldturtle didnt no)
Anywayz this isn’t my best chapter (erm 2nd one XD) cuz I was brain dead…
I SWEAR IT IS MY PIANO TEACHER’S FAULT!!!
Anyways plz click on the I like this blog or sumtin T.T and if u didn’t no why I didn’t post my story up yesterday, go to my page and click on The Black Angel, HOLD UP k? lol

Here are pixes of the characters… =D I told them to do something or what not, but since I dun no Kerry’s sn in aim and yim and he rarely comes on in ms, so I decided to just erm um get his from the rankings! (w00t aint I smart??) lol (zak got a makeover so he took another pix T.T

And yet again, I KNOW this one is worse than the first one, but at least it cleared up who was who O.o and, A NEW CHARACTER XD well actually, all of them are new characters, so w.e XD