Hey sorry about last chappy, it wasn’t that good and i had a massive hangover from a party so yea sorry.
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I hear the bells now, finnally away from home, rules and childhood. So this is where i start my training, Maple Island. All my friends eventually went here and my mum promised me when i turn 16 she’ll let me go. So here i go, the beginning of my adventures.
Me: Soooo where do we go?
Jen: *-_-* Im going to visit my parents, they are trainers on this island.
Me: Well… goodbye. *smiling*
Me: *thinking to myself* Who was the last person to come to Maple Island. Andrew.
Well i better start looking for Andrew and do whatever hes doing on this island. Hmmm after 2 long hours of helping people and asking directions I end up in Southperry. Theres Max.
Me: Hey Max
Max: O My God Drake you finnaly came this is so awesome
Me: So wheres Andrew?
Max: He left for Lith Harbour yesterday, so when did you come
Me: A few hours ago
Max: So you dont look much stronger
Me: I havent been training
*Jen comes from the Potion Shop*
Me: *looking behind Max’s back* Hey Jen
Jen: How did… Nevermind, so whats up Drake
Me: Did I tell you my… name?
Jen: No but I feel I… sorry I got your name mixed up
Me: No Drake is my name
Max: Well urm hey lovebirds ill just be going this way now….
Me and Jen: *simutaniously* WERE NOT LOVEBIRDS!!!
Looking embarrased both of us and Max shocked out of his life.
Me: Hey wha do ya do on this Island
Jen: *embarrased* I don’t really know either, I was about to ask my parents, hey wanna come with?
Me: *suprised* Sure, wanna be friends?
Jen: Sure
Me: *thinking to myself* Man awesome i made friends with someone that I love. But I always know she won’t love me back
Going up a hill to Amtherst(spell check please). Then Jen knocked on a Door. A woman came to the door.
Woman: O Jen your finally hear, we got your last message that said you weren’t coming
Jen: Yea I almost wasn’t going to come but it was him who made it possible *tilting her head to my direction*
Woman: Thank you
Me: *blushing* urm no problem, i wanted to come here as well.
Woman: Come inside Jen and you can come in as well. Sorry i didn’t get your name it was?
Jen: Drake, his name is Drake
Woman: *suprised* o well come in
Me: Thank you.
Woman: Least we can do for helping Jen come here.
I get into the room and there on the wall was a picture of me, in my armour, with my weapons, with my shield, my arrows, my cape and a bag of throwing stars. And this time I think i know that was me because in the corner there was a name, Drake, Unitied Warrior Of Victoria, Chief Guard of El nath Kingdom and Wielder of The Daemon Sword. Daemon…. The red and black sword!
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Hey can you really rate this one out of 10 for me please im just gonna see my progress. And stay tuned I might make another one later.
Urm i got 33 people who already viewed this and no-one has rated so please rate out of 10 please.
~SG
OK this is a little confusing, i thought the boat they took was going to lith but it was to amherst? how is Drake united warrior of vic, chief guard of El Nath Kingdom and wielder of the Daemon Sword? he’s still on Maple Island 0.o i don’t really get it
It’s great. Things are still abit rushed but overall BETTER THAN THE OTHER ONES.
This is probably the best one so far?
p.s, i helped you get this ontot he front page. 😛
thanks for gettin it onto the front page and the thingo of cheif guard and stuff is in the “future”