Fire: Ahhhhhhh Get AWAYYY anthony and donny Rush Back as fast as Thay Can!
Anthony: Fast Come on! ” Fire Kicks! mike in The Nuts! and hes In Tears
Fire: hes a idiot!! Donny: are you Allright.. Fire: Yeah Anthony: ill walk you Back to Your house
Just to make sure your Allright Fire: Thanks i am realy happyi dident go out With that guy
Anthony: haha. your Lucky i am Strong
“The Next Day Anthony calls Fire” Anthony: Hello fire: hi ant. Anthony Wanna come to my house
and watch a movie after School on Friday Fire: is Sunday Fine? Anthony: Umm OK Bye Fire: Byeee
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To Be Continued See My Lucky day Part.11
Comment Me Back on A Rate Between 1-10
Bye And —–Happy Mapleing—–
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Way too way too short.
i kno just my next story Is
Bigggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
Soo confusing and too short to understand anything =/
Woulda helped if you started a new line everytime someone new spoke.
Or add punctuation between each speaker. Might have been easier
For Example
Instead of:
“The Next Day Anthony calls Fire” Anthony: Hello fire: hi ant. Anthony Wanna come to my house
and watch a movie after School on Friday Fire: is Sunday Fine? Anthony: Umm OK Bye Fire: Byeee
Try this.
The next day, Anthony calls Fire.
Anthony: Hello?
Fire: Hi Ant.
Anthony: Wanna come to my house and watch a movie after School on Friday?
Fire: is Sunday Fine?
Anthony: Umm OK Bye.
Fire: Byeee!