Dear diary ,
I am bascially a very shy person . This is why I have chosen to be a warrior . I like the strength I see , the power . Since Im not good at remembering things , I guess no mage for me . In school , teacher said that writing a diary overcomes your shyness . This is the reason why I am writing this down . Teacher told us to have a dream future .
I wish to be strong , a great warrior and have many friends . because of my shyness I only have one firend . her name : Ivy .
She wants to be a bowman . I do not know the reason why , but Im sure one day , I will ask her . The events tht happen today were of up most importantance . Today is Chinese New Year . A wonderful day . Its gives us lots of quest to prove ourselves to our job instructers . But I will not start on any of the quest . Today is alos a day of spending time together with our family and friends . If i have time later , I might start training soon . Maple island is techinally boring . Wonderful stories of victoria island has spread on during lunch . I might stay back for one year as my little brother wants to folow me to victoria island .
This should be all for today . I want to go and have fun now .
And one more thing , mum bought me a spear , she says its to encourage me to be a spear man . I can be very fickle minded at times .
Spearman all the way ,
Reptina
18.02.2007
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Very interesting way to type
Awesome~!
Its the literal expression of the word ‘MMO blog’.
XD Love it.
*applause behind the curtains*
“Pay no attention to that woman behind the curtains”
*Bashes*
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A diary entry as a mapler <3
“Pay no attention to that woman behind the curtains”
*Bashes*
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A diary entry as a mapler <3″
You’re weird. o_O
Anyway, that “dairy language” is interesting.
I enjoyed it, gave different view points on life.
Dairy? Quang, you drank too much milk?
I see an abundance of full stops here. Do make more use of commas, colons or even semi-colons.
You forgot to capitalise the first words of some sentences.
Also, there are minor mistakes pertaining to punctuation and tenses.
Still a good try, although you should lengthen the chapters if possible.
In school my teacher would never accept anything so short >.<
Cmon dude, it is a diary entry, so it’s free style.
O_O That sentence had nothing to do with the paragraph.
It’s your life. It’s your gadda.