Impossible Love? ch 1 pt 4

Victoria’s view………….

I took oiut each of his “mighty” soldiers in a matter of seconds. I didn’t even sweat. As I watched him getting of his steed. I thought to my self.*Will this one be worthy to be considered my challenge?*

Battlefied’s View……………….
The battle started. As Nyrok launched an arrow bomb straight at Victoria. Victoria had blocked the bong by shooting fire arrows and holy arrows. But she soon found the holy arrows to be useless!!!!! THe arrows were bouncing off Nyrok as if she was throwing paper planes at him. She quickly got back on her feet as she sent a wave of lighting spears twords his way. Nyrok with every precision possible. Avoided the shots as best as he could and kept on the offensive. He had known that this battle would be tough but he did not it would be this tough. In an act of anguish he had sumoned a puppet. Although Victoria did not mean too or intend too. Whenever she had used any of her magic. Everything flew twords the puppet!!!!. She soon became frustrated and teleported right behind Nyrok. Nyrok had noticed she had teleported right behind him and as he pulled out his spear and swung, she swung her wand at him. They were both immediately…….

4 thoughts on “Impossible Love? ch 1 pt 4”

  1. Sorry you guys for this one, I meant to make it longed but I accidently clicked on submit blog and I couldn’t re-submit it because I had reached my limit of writing blogs for the day.

  2. BERRYBERRY BAD GWAMMER!
    pleasepleaseplease double check! I saw at least 5 mistakes!
    otherwise, pretty good=P
    waiting for your next story
    -CheerioHappiness-♥

  3. ahhhh i suggest usually not more then 1 a day cuz
    1. It’s good so u can redo this mistake,
    2. It hold suspense
    3. Just, a thing i guess.
    4. I found it gets fans to say “MORE MORE MORE MORE”

    well u said u wanted tips and i hope u dont take this as critisism and u dont have to tank these tips cuz im not a very succesful writer,

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