Empty eyes 4

“A bounty?” Van said puzzled
“Yup looks like it” Laxe smiled broadly.
“I can understand why they are after you,child support and what not,but me! what did I do?!” Van said bewildered
“hey I dont have any kids…yet”
“uh huh, So what are we gonna do about this?” Van said looking at his picture.”Its not even a good shot either”
Laxe thought for a moment. ‘No idea” he smirked “but I do have some good news”
“whats that?” Van looked up
“first of all; Sam is asleep,always a good thing,no nagging”
“of course,what else is there?”
“A new lead” Laxe said chuckling.
“Its about damn time,so what is it?”
“Well its a area you should be familar with; El nath.”
Vans face became stone, memorys like worms wriggled across his mind.He hadnt been in El nath since…
“You leaving or not?” Laxe shook him from his day dreams.

“Tickets are 5000 mesos each sir” The ticket booth said. Van passed the money in to the hole. A blue stub of a ticket poked out in reponse.
“Thanks” He said making his way toward the ship.He could see ships picking up passengers. A ship of bones loomed in the distance.
perfect he thought climbing to the platform.
“looks like the rogs are gonna come” A warrior said fearfully.
“No problem” Van said truthfully,rogs were nothing but a annoyence. The real problem was he hated such things. Not worth the time they waste.
Van stepped onto the boat with a sigh.He pulled out a board and spread the pieces across.
“Might as well” he thought. Omok was a fun game he had to admit.simple but fun.A youthful bowmen sat down.
“I’m a little new at this” He said.
“Thats fine. My name is Van nice to meet you…”
“Kevin, freinds call me Glac.”
Van put a piece on the board “Well lets get started.”

The boat stopped with a thud on Orbis the orbis platform.Van stepped off slowly.His legs wobbled as they got used to the floating sensation of Orbis.
“Never liked it here,I like my feet on solid ground” Van mumbled.
“you get used to it.” Glac said.
“Ya I hope so,guess this is good bye Glac” Van smiled.

The tower was one of those simple yet bothersome things. The sentinals were unavoidable and the pepes wouldnt stop moving.
Van was amazed at how much he hated his home town.The snow would never melt. Always cold, always winter. The town was a weather mans dream
“Well today in El nath it will snow and looks like this weekend there will be more snow” Van thought. He advanced toward the entrance. A small ball of fluff blocked his path.It was a squeaky little thing with alot of powdered snoq in its mane. It looked at him puzzled as he approuched. “squeak” It thought which means something close to “DONT KILL ME!”
He passed it by without a thought. They were never any problem before,why slaughter them now?
“There are more stars then I remember” Van thought looking up.
[please note that it seems that even though you celebrate Christmas in El nath, it is the most Jewish town in maple O_o odd isnt it]

He passed below a shrine to god knows what.Maybe the lord of frost, a immortal ice mage, or a great big yeti. It really didnt matter.
I feel happy? he thought. Thats rare,guess without Laxe I’m on smile depravation
Snow blew in his face. “Ok never mind this place sucks”

Short and full of dumb crumby jokes; Like me ^^
*im not short*
Hey Glac made a small appearance. spell check wont work on my comp ^^ you can tell huh?
Lettys are cute. El nath rules. Snow rules. PEPES SUCK
Hello all my fans who dont exist, my storie is speciel
*insert Dust in the wind song here*

7 songs to never play at a funeral
1) if your happy and you know it
2) Dust in the wind
3) Im so excited
4) Like a Virgin
5) Happy happy joy joy
6) Shout
7) Celebrate

*Fades Away*

Nobody At Night

6 thoughts on “Empty eyes 4”

  1. yay! Van XD makes me think thats me. . . lol
    What you could do to improve this series is to give the readers a clue of what happened before this. Like a brief explanation would do

    – VanillaPocki –

  2. but but but you read the other ones
    and increase my views and possible likes ^^
    your name is Van
    lucky
    i wanted to be named that
    i will have to ask the ninja to steal your name and give it to me, he can do it he is the ninja ^^
    Besides the storie starts a little further from each ones ending. so ppl always have quistion ^^

    *Fades Away*

    Nobody At Night

  3. Use capitals.
    They are in this world for a reason, or I would have sacrificed them.
    Just helpin.

    ~~~~Pirkid~~~~

  4. pirkid said: “Use capitals.
    They are in this world for a reason, or I would have sacrificed them.
    Just helpin.

    ~~~~Pirkid~~~~”

    are you talking about when ppl speak or at the begging on a sentence?
    i messed up on both probably. I was rushing =X

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