The MapleUnbelievable Chp.1

My name is Harold. I’m 13 years old.

You might think that i’m a bookworm or geek by my name but actually i’m best in sports.

My hobby as i said is sports. I love soccer the most.

1 day…….

“Hey, foul!”

“NO!!”

i was at the finals of my school soccer championship.

It was the last minute when my team hit a foul…

“NOOOOO!!! THIS CANNOT BE!!!” Shouted Jared, our goal keeper….

WE LOST

On my way home, i met up with a bunch of gangsters, they offered me drugs but i said no.

By the time i could walk i was beaten by the gangsters.

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I was awoken by a blinding flash of light…..

Suddenly, i heard a godly voice….

Then only i realised that i wasn’t in town but in a place where there is fresh air and beautiful view.

I admired the view for a moment until the voice spoke again.

“Welcome begginer, please choose a name that you like”

So i chose a name.

“I’m sorry but you cannot use this name” the voice spoke.

So i chose another name….

“Matsuoshun” I said

“Matsuoshun can be used” the voice said.

Then i started to choose my outfit and appearence.

I started to think, ‘Is this a dream??’

Finally, a dice appeared out of no where.

So i rolled it.

i saw a screen come out saying:
INT 4
DEX 8
STR 5
LUK 8

I did not know what does that mean….

suddenly, everything turned pitched black!

When i opened my eyes, i saw a girl sitting on a platform of some kind.

i talk to her

” Hi, may i know where am i?”

“Umm.. you must be a begginer here.Firstly this place is called Maple Island. Right over there is my house*pointing to her house*”

“Oh, (i thought this must be a dream)”

“Err i kno its rude to ask a beginner but can u do me a favour?”

“Of Course” I said

“That’s my sister over there*pointing to her sis* can you help mi get my mirror from her??”

“Sure” I said

So i walked towards her sister.I saw a rope so i climbed it.

“Hi are you her sister?”

“Yeah, can i help you?”

“She needs her mirror.”

“Oh, that girl, always calling strangers to help her.”

She gave me a red mirror.

I walked back to the girl just now and gave her the mirror.

SUDDENLY, i felt a rush of power in my body, i did not kno what was that but i feel more experienced.

*BY NOW I WAS ABSOLUTELY SURE I WAS DREAMING*

Later on, i did many favours for many people and everytime i feel that rush of power in my body.

Seldomly, i feel more stronger as i get that rush of power.

I found a device in my pocket that looks like a PDA.

i can see that i am lv 4 now, and i hav 67 hit points.

Suddenly, i saw a snail that has a green shell on it, how perculiar….

i approached it quietly.

I thought it was harmless but by the minute i touch it i felt a knockback and was hit back. i checked the PDA and saw the my hit points is now 66/67. I begin to attack the green shelled snail with my sword.

After 3 hits the snail dissapeared! How strange and i felt the rush of power in my body again.

I walk and walk and walk until i saw a red snail dis time, i attack it like the green one but suddenly i was attacked by a mob of snails!
i ran for my life but it was too late, my PDA showed 0/67 and a tombstone that was found it graveyards dropped down from the sky. I was dead!! I begin to panick.

Suddenly, i heard the voice again.

” Click OK to teleport the the nearest town”

so i click “OK”

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I was teleported in a town wif ships and buildings.

I checked my PDA and there wrote Lith Harbour.

I thought

(Where the hell is Lith Harbour??!!)

So i walked and walked and walked until i reached another town.

My PDA says AMHERST.

I saw a girl and talk to her.

She ask me a lot of questions.

Everytime i answered correctly i feel the rush of power again.

At last i feel stronger again and the PDA showed BEGINNER LV 6

I was thrilled and i also knew everything about Maple Island.

Suddenly…

To Be Continued……..

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7 thoughts on “The MapleUnbelievable Chp.1”

  1. Omg this story is nice !noobjie if u want can take a look @ my story too! thx ya

  2. erm u haved to work on some part ya noe like erm when u are in lith haoubour u cant go back to maple island so work on that u can be beta then me!

  3. really hoping that the 2nd story if u want take a look @ jesusfreak,tsukkie,jech their story is super nice 2!

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