The Spear of Hope

I told you guys I was going to write a story!

The Spear Of Hope
part 1:Moving Day

Remember all those storys of heros and villans your parents used to tell you? Neither do I, but let’s just say I have my own story to tell…………..

“So where do you want them Mom?” cried the boy.
“In the corner, please Crocher” said his mother. The boy, Crocher, placed the end table down, and turned toward his mother. His hair was as black as coal, while his eyes and hair had the color of chocolate. He wore a plain white T-shirt and blue jean shorts.
“Hey Mom, is it alright if I take a look around the village?” he asked.
“Alright but remember to bring your sword” replied his mother. But Crocher was already out the door.

Crocher began walking down the path in front of his house, he spotted a girl standing next to a pond. The girl looked at him. Their eyes locked for a couple of seconds.
“She’s beautiful” Crocher thought. The girl had long brown hair, her eyes were wide and looked full of life. She wore a yellow T-shirt and had a red skirt on.

“Hi!” she said with a grin.
“H-Hey” replied Crocher. ” I’m kinda new around here and I was wonder-“
“Ah you must Crocher then right?” the girl pointed towards Crocher’s house ” You live there right?”
“Yeah I do, but who are you?” asked Crocher.
“Oh my bad, I’m Ariel” she said. Suddenly, a loud roar boomed through their ears. A Crimson Barlog fllew over-head. It spotted Crocher and Ariel, and dove straight for them.
“Run for it!” they screamed in unison. Crocher grabed Ariel’s hand, and began running.They ran for a good 4mins before they were out of breath. The Crimson Barlog was closing in, Crocher braced himself. He heard Ariel scream. And then a silence.

More to come……..
Hoped you liked it!

4 thoughts on “The Spear of Hope”

  1. Crocher XD . . .

    Sorry, I just can’t say that name without laughing . . .

    Haha, a random balrog hurdling from the sky towards unsuspecting nooblets . . . I would love to see that in-game.

    Anyway, aren’t you rushing a bit?

    Extend the contents of this chapter by three pages, then maybe I will take it seriously . . .

  2. Thanks for the comments.
    I’ll consider everything for the next chapter. I should be finished today.

    And yeah, when I thought of the name Crocher, it made me laugh a bit to. (turns out I really love the name.)

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