It is said, that many moons ago, lived a legendary Hermit, by the name of Tobi. It was his ambition to be powerful, famous and able to achieve anything he’d ever wanted. He overtook rivals, friends, ..everyone.
The concept of team-work was no problem for Tobi, he put together his powers with others, combined with other people he managed to overcome any obstacle, including Zakum, obtaining himself the legendary claw, ‘Casters’.
Tobi worked hard, earning alot of respect, but the respect corrupted him and made him a self-contained show-off. It was with this self-contained attitude, that he made an attempt to single-handedly slay the almighty Zakum, once again.
He did, infact make a valid attempt, managing to destroy a few of Zakums arms, but it was the oblivious magic attacks of Zakum which made Tobi unable to battle anymore. With Tobis last breath, he managed to throw another star at Zakum, but it was useless, he was supper.
“Subi c’mon, wake up already.” ..I felt a slight tug on my arm.
I groaned, it was time to get out of bed, already.
I opened my eyes to see my friend, Rose, leant over me.
“Come on Subi, we’ve got some training to do!”
She was right, if we ever wanted to achieve the second job advancement we needed to put some major effort in.
I hesitated on my way, thinking of that dream I had, of the mysterious character called Tobi.
I shrugged and followed Rose to Kerning.
The levels seemed to pass so quickly with Rose, she had a friendly aura, the glisten in her eyes gave me enough strength to proceed in levelling.
“Level 30 already,” She said, smiling at me.. “Head over to the Dark Lord, he’ll inform you on how to become an Assassin.”
With one last glance at Rose, I was on my way, step by step I was closer to becoming a legend.
It was later that day, I found what Assassins were really capable of, I seemed to be defeating the mobs much easier now, although time passed slowly, without Rose.
I needed to see how she was doing, it was at that moment I heard her shriek from a distance.
I got there as fast as possible, there was Rose, cowering. I didn’t fully understand what her problem was, at first.
But then I saw it, a Giant Stone Gollem, no longer disguised in the rocks, emerged. It may not have been the fastest of monsters, but I knew it could deal some serious damage. ‘How could I let Rose be in this kind of situation?’ I thought to myself, with that on my mind, I began.
I was moving unlike I ever had before, with a slight spring in my step, the stars being let loose from my Avarice alot quicker than usual.
I hurled stars at the Gollems humongous body, continously. With Rose in danger I had alot more confidence in myself than usual.
A deafening yelp, and it was gone. I had beat the Gollem, and rose was safe.
A surge of energy leapt through my body, I had levelled up. But it wasn’t just me who had been training, Rose had too.
We were almost identical levels, she could’ve taken down that Gollem easily, but why she didn’t remained a mystery.
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I haven’t gone into depth about some of the characters yet.
So if you think some of the storyline was flimsy, you need to wait for part 2.
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subis and tobis arer stars,
Which is why I named the Sins in the story after them.
thats a pretty cool story
lol i like the way how the character doesnt kno that rose likes him
Hey, it’s not bad, but Avarices are for level 40, and you missed some grammar/punctuation. Other than that, it’s pretty good.