The Forgotten Class Part 4

Okay so anyway, just so you don’t get comfused, this si still part of the story.
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Terry rode his motor bike to the edge of the cliff and plunged his doom bringer into the ground.
Terry:”I said I’d out-live both our lives.Easier said than done.”
Terry started to get painful flashes in his arm. He went to his bike and started the engine. He put his goggles on and started to head toward the Omega Sector. When suddenly a holy arrow came out form behind him. It was the Omega S-Police. Kadaj and his gang were slowly catching up to the Police.
Kadaj:”Need some help Terry?”
Terry:”Why not?Let me start this off.”
Terry opened his bike compartment and pulled out a Doombringer and the attachement.(For thoses of you who are confused you would be familiar with this if you’ve seen the Final Fantasy 7 movie though i’ve made a few changes.)
He put the two together and stood on his bike.
Terry:”SHOUT!!!”
The police cars flewl out of sky and the police jumped out and started attacking Terry.
Loz:”My turn.AVENGER!”
Loz killed the two policemen.
Terry:”There’s more coming.”
Yazoo:”It’s time for destruction.ICE STRIKE!”
Ice fell out of the sky hitting all the police cars along the way.
Terry:”im out of here.”
Terry left. Terrys been wanted ever since the liberation of the Omega Clan. Omega Clan was a race of aliens that were long thought gone but they came back and wanted there land back. The Omega Sector was built on top of there ground so the people of the OS thought they were attacking. The OC was captured and terry freed them. No one knows why buit Kadajs gang and Terry seem to have a strong connection….
As Terry was riding his bike towards his church, something hard hit the church wall, it was a stone with a circle on a stone with a warrior on it…….
———-Back to the main people———-
So far Flarius and Anna have searched all of Heneseys, Ellinia, Perion and Kerning City.
Anna:” Seems like no warriors or bowman like going into sucluded places.”
Flarius:” Next stop Orbis!”
So they bought their tickets and went off to Orbis.
Inside the cabin Flarius and Anna were watching TV.
Anna:”Do you think we’ll find the third person Flar?”
Flarius:”I don’t know, he or she could be anywhere.”
????:”FLarius?”
Flarius:”Wha? Who’s there?
A girl about Flarius’ age poked out and gave Flarius a hug.
Anna:”Who’s this?”
Flarius:”Ugh, she’s my baby sister, Tifa.”
Tife:” B.Rabbi I havent seen you in such a long time!”
Anna:”B.Rabbi?”
Anna said snickering
Flarius:”It’s a nick name she came up with when we were small.”
Flarius gave Tifa a hug.
Tifa:”Who are you pretty lady?”
Anna blushed at the comment
Anna:”Me? I’m Flarius’ girlfriend.”
Tifa:”Oooooo someone’s got a girlfriend!”
Tifa started laughing.
Flarius:”She’s actually really tall for her age. She’s 12.”
Tifa:”Yep, a 4 year difference.”
Ship Captain:”MAY I HAVE YOUR AMEDIAT(TERRIBLE SPELLING) ATTENTION PLEASE! THE CRIMSON BARLOGS HAVE ARIVED SO I ADVISE YOU PEOPLE TO REMAIN CALM AND REMAIN INSIDE YOUR CABINS. THANK YOU.
5 seconds later….
Someguy:”AHHHH WERE ALL GONNA DIE!!!”
Some other guy:”AHHHHH WHAT HE SAID ——->”
Flarius:”Oh my god why do they act like this every time. Okay I’ll be right back.”
Flarius went outside and dropped some money on the floor.
Flarius:” Come and get it you sorry excuses for monsters.”
The crimson barlogs heard the remark and charged toward Flarius.He hasted himself and jumped in the air as he was about to use a meso explosion, some noob was stupid enough to pick the money up.
Flarius:”What in the name of Jesus christ?!?!”
Flarius had to protect the noob from getting hurt by getting in front of him.
The black thunder stung like hell itself.
Flarius:”GAHHHHH!”
Flarius fell backwords.The noob quickly dropped the money and ran away scared of him.There was a holy in his chest.
Flarius:”IM NOT GIVING UP!”
Flarius jumped in the air and shoved mesos down the Barlogs mouths and yelled.
Flarius:”MESO EXPLOSION!!!”
Suddenly the Barlogs exploded and they dropped 2 scrolls. He picked them up and fell down fainting.
First person view of Flarius from now on.
When I woke up I was in the hospital with a large bandage across my chest. I saw Anna laid down beside me and she was sleeping.
Me:”Anna, wake up.”
Anna:” Oh my god honey your alive! The doctor said that you wouldn’t make it! I never believed that oyu were truely dead. You were in a coma for about 2 weeks.
Me:”Two weeks huh? Then I must really stink.”
We both laughed and kissed.
Tifa:” Ewwwwww gross.”
Me and Anna:”You’ll learn someday.”
Just then the doctor walked in.
Doctor:” Nurse, what was the time of death agai-“
He stopped to see that I was woken up.
Doctor:”SWEET JESUS YOUR ALIVE!”
Me:”I’ll never give up on protecting those I love.”
I said as I hugged my sister and my girlfriend.
Bull:”Hey Anna, since Flarius is dead will you go out wit-“
He stopped and to see that I was awake.
I hasted myself and jumped on to Bull.
Me:”You trying to move in on my girlfriend Bull?”
Bull:”I-um-i gotta go!”
Bull ran away.
Me:”Hahaha.”
Anna:”Now shouldn’t we get going?”
Me:” Yah I guess.”
Anna:”So we’re looking across orbis now right?”
Me:” Yah I guess.”
Anna:”And were taking Tifa right?”
Me:” Yah I guess- wait we can’t take her on the quest!She might get hurt!”
Anna:”Oh honey you worry about things to much! Besides, Me being a priest can heal you guys both.”
Me:” Yah I guess.”
Anna:”Stop saying that.”
Me:”Okay, okay. So you asked her if she had a stone irght? And you explained the situation?
Anna:”Yes, and yes.”
Me:”She doesn’t have im thinking, so lets go.”
I hasted the three of us and we went off.

Note:I might’ve said to much O.o
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4 thoughts on “The Forgotten Class Part 4”

  1. I personally think it’s kind of good, 8.5/10. You have a little to much dialogue, in my opinion. But I thought the noob picking up the money was kind of funny. Also, the “eww gross” thing, I guess, is very typical younger, immature child behavior. If that’s what you want to paint Flarius’s sister as, then insert more of those. If not, then I suggest you cut back on those types of remarks.

    By the way, usually if there’s hole in someone’s chest, they won’t live. Try to make the injury a little bit less dramatic, and I’m sure it’ll be fine.

    I thought the end was funny in a way. =) “Ya I guess” Hahaha rofl

    I am a noob! Bwhahaha! =P

  2. Thank’s for the advice! I’ll try to remember that, and also, I think i over dramatized it to because the black thunder is bigger than the body in the game XD

  3. You’re welcome. It is? Lol. I’ve only seen crimson once in the game, and that was when I touched it(and surived, I had magic guard). I wasn’t stupid enough to attack it.

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