Ive been writing a bunch of stories but it seems like no one likes them -,-, they get like 20 views and thats about it, ive brought it to a point were it could end or continue and im not sure if I should stop or what -,- any opinions? cuz knowing ur stuff sucks makes you lose motivation =(
Mike got up he was not dead yet he activated power guard and he took out his dagger, he threw it at DB, he blocked and Mike charged, he was going to become a White Knight no matter what the cost. DB had 5 orbs, he charged as well, this would decide the battle, smoke filled the room as the two collided. Blood went everywhere; the loser would most likely die. One of them was on the ground, bleeding to death, the dust cleared as the winner stood up, he took his axe out of Mike’s body.
Thats the last line of my story, well if it ends that is -,-
ehhh mike shouldnt be dead=.=
He might not be if I choose to continue ;p
Know when to stop(ie, there’s so many things in one sentence). Also try not to mush your whole chapter into one paragraph. One writing rule is that dialogue starts a new paragraph.
uhh, learn to use paragraphs . its hard reading
Are they any better now?
, Uhm.
Writing should be for you. Not for pageviews or ratings. If you write for other people instead of yourself, you only end up making scrap.
~Mip
Writing should be for you. Not for pageviews or ratings. If you write for other people instead of yourself, you only end up making scrap.
~Mip”
Yes of course I agree with you, but I never said I would stop writing, im wondering if I should just stop putting this stuff on the site since im guessing its a waste of space if like 4 people read it and it dies, thats what im saying. This site isnt for storage its to share stuff with other people, if no ones reading theres no sharin ; so its basically storage which I could easily do on my own computer =P so poo to you!