Years ago. When there acutally was a place called Myth Harbor people lived in peace and had mystical weapons. Everyone helped in protecting this perfect community. It was safe nice and clean. I, Aaron am writing of memories that I remmeber ever since that fateful day happened. It was bright and sunny. My sister and I went snail hunting for snail shells. My sister decided to take a break and go back home. We weren’t that far. So I agreed. We lived in a small house on the side of the busy city. Armed with a fruit knife I killed a couple of snails and collected the snail shells they drop. Sometimes they drop poweful mysitcal rolls. I killed my last one and it dropped a blue scroll. It read “dagger.” I placed it on my fruit knife. My fruit knife glowed with a mystical glow and it became more offensive. I was gald. I went back home. A dark mist was in the surroundings. I came close to it. I stopped and sniffed the air. It was poison. I ran back and waited a day. Sleeping in a haven i made a while back ago. I ran back and to my surpise everyone was dead. Everyone besides my sister. Father and mother lay dead. My mother with a powerful weapon called the maple kayando and my father held a mystical sword called the Maple soul slinger. I took them and buryed my mother and father. I couldn’t find my sister. Maybe she escaped, didn’t die. I don’t know. It’s been 3 years now and i am now able to use stronger weapons and defend for myself. My sister however i do not know. I will conitnue to serech for her. Myth harbor disappeared and a new harbor was built. Lith harbor. I am in henesys where i live in a emtpy abandoned house. There are a few mushrooms but oh well. End diary.
I KNOW ITS HORRIBLE!! I KNOW MY SPELLING IS HORRIBLE AND MY GRAMMER SUCKS! i will improve along the way >.>
Please read the whole thing >.>
its readable to me -__-
um, wall of text?
Try inserting some paragraphs to make it less of a strain on the eyes.
try revising it, its sorta, (dont take offense), ughhh.
Lol, stick to meeping aaron XD
what. . .you stole my story name.
@Shatred: Umm. Maple Story is. . . Maplestory. >.> I don’t think anyone’s stealing anyone’s name?
Wall of text, like what Phoenix said. And you sort of rush things. Why are you running to and fro so much? And when something becomes more offensive, erm, you sort of hate it more? :X Lots of room for improvement, dude.
You can use some phrase to describe your feelings. You like didnt cry for your parents.
I DUNNO IM STUPID >_<