Ok I have part 3 ready to go sorry it took me so long I had delays like a cook out on the 4th and I went to the movies on the 5th but now I finished it here is The Legend of Bob the Snail Part 3 oh yeah and Part 1 and Part 2. Hope you like it and heres a helpful hint :
PRESS THE I LIKED BUTTON
whens part 4 coming out, make it another cliff hanger
Would you consider this a cliff hanger
Hmm, A Pixie with bad Grammar, O.0 Hey~~~I wanna be in the story T.T
Anyways Please Do Continue
Anyways Please Do Continue”
Ok PM me what monster you want to be and you can come out in part 5 or part 6
oh and decide you name 
nah this is a cant miss
Would you consider this a cliff hanger
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No major flaws, other than that the “To Be Continued” could be more centered. :>