Stories of the Trainee

“THAT’S IT! THAT’S THE LAST SHROOM I’M KILLING” <levels up> ” IM LVL 10 NOW, BYE BYE MAPLE ISLAND, HELLO NEW WORLD!!!” Aron looks at his remaining mesos and goes to Shanks. “Hey Shanks, I’m ready for real, this time for reals.” says Aron. Shanks looks up to him (because he’s short). “Ok, you sure? if you are, C’mon aboard remember 150 mesos!” “Ok, ok. Here ya go” <loses 150 mesos> “WOW IT’S LITH HARBOR!!” exclaims Aron.

We leave our hero to a series of adventures to go to Kerning City to become his destined job…

<Enters Fusion Bar> “no one’s here,, maybe JM from the street was wrong… Hey wait, there’s a hole in the bathro <falls in>ooooooooooooooommm.” “Oof, that hurt, hey wait a minute, it’s a secret underground thingymabobber. Always wanted these but dad never let’d me.” “You won’t survive that long out there if that hurted, now who are you?” says a mysterious figure.
“*gulp*, Aron an explorer to meet the legendary Dark Lord.. is that you?” The figure turns jumps from the ceiling to Aron to examine him. “Yes, what business are you here for?” “I’m here to becom a rogue”

This is the beginning of the new series MAPLE TRAINEE, it’ll be guide with a few things here and there.. so hope you like it (imma get flamed sooo badly)

3 thoughts on “Stories of the Trainee”

  1. These following tips aren’t meant to discourage you from writing, but to help you improve on your further chapters:

    1.) Grammar and spelling mistakes.

    2.) Please make chapters at least a decent 7 paragraphs before handing them in.

    3.) Don’t write, <loses 150 mesos> , write: He lost one hundred fifty mesos.

    4.) paragraphsplis

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