Being a ‘Sin is hard…. but i became stronger now and is finally strong enough to go to……
Ludiburium, Ludiburium,…. LUDIBURIUM!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHOO
(Aaron is now level 35) <Ticket Booth Person> Yes Sir? Ya need a ticket to Orbis? (Aaron is puzzled) Orbis? I need yo go to Ludi… (Boothe Person is now laughing) Oh… sir… you need to go to Orbis first then go to Ludi… (noob~~) (Aaron blushes*) oh, oh i knew that… just forgot~ (not really) 5000 mesos for the orbis ticket and 5000 mesos to Ludi so that would be 10,000 mesos total.. but looking at your level, I say you can afford it. (What a rip off~~) (What a noob~~)
Some where in Korean Folk Town
A Barlog summoning bag ey? (Mysterious figure talking to Hongbu) Yessss Sir, (!_!) i have it but is my grandparent’s GREAT possesion and to give it to a person like you~ (SLASH~ NOOOOOOOOOOO, FATHER, I HAVE FAILED YOU)
<Back in Orbis Ship>
Isn’t this great? Win flowing through your hair, Going away from “home” and adventuring somewhere new~ man do i feel happy? <You think this is fun?> Who’s that? Aaron said. <Mine name is Tiger and I can tell you this place isnt fun yet>
(Alt+Tab) nexon.maplestory.net (rankings) Tiger — lvl 181 warrior
<I gotta say, your enjoying this more than I am… but im here for one reason only and it seems your gonna find out why.>
(Sky turns dark and ship suddenly stops)
Crogs (Crimson Barlogs)
<Tiger leaps unto the sails and slashes an oncoming Crog towarding Aaron>
(The damage… is soo high) Aaron thinks
<3 more Crogs launch from the pirate ship and surrounds Tiger>
(Oh no he’s gonna get hurt.. I better help him, but how?) Aaron notices the lines that connects the ship from the Pirates and the ferry… and gets an idea. This will take some accuracy.) <He chucks his Mockbie at the lines and…>
The Pirate Shipe drifts away leavinh peace for the rest of the ride.
Tiger <after defeating those Crogs single-handedly> takes a rest and eats up some Unagi’s and drinks some water.
P.S Dont Flame for grammar, its only the net
P.P.S. Im srry its not long enough but i cant think too well today
P.P.P.S. idk if i should continue with this so dont complain bout no more or dont cheer if theres no more of this…
Haha, I like the end notes.
I was just about to confront you about grammar, format and length . . . but if you already know that you suck, I see no reason for me to procede further with trying to assist you. Toodles.
Lulz Ludiburium
Hmm. . . is it Balrog or Barlogs?
Balrog.
Why have I seen ‘Barlogs’ labeled in the Maple homepage before then?
It’s just a common error. Personally I would like Barlog better, but it’s Balrog.
well i cant say, but the grammar thing is old pplz, grammar isnt a strong point in pplz wen u chat or post on the net~~~
Would you like to read a novel with this kind of grammar level?
Sorry to be blunt, but it’s the same thing with fanfics.
Can I say: Or comics.
ah smart smart XD just its the net, and we all dont need to be so crazy about grammar, and besides if you want it fixed so badly, just request it ><