14 thoughts on “Hopefully ~1”

  1. yh2thalo said: “I’m sorry. . . I can’t read the red text very well.”

    I’ll try my best to make it easier to read in the next comic.

  2. I don’t get it. There’s such a thing as being too weird. But I’m hoping that’s just because this is the first time I read it. And yes, the text is hard to see.

  3. good editing but I don’t get it. like who’s talking about the breifcase?whats in the briefcase?whats that box thing from earlier? where’d the monster come from?

  4. Pick a different color for the text, or put speech bubbles on them so they are easier to read. And the pannels are too jumpy, I can’t really figure out what’s going on. Pannel transitions are important!

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