MS,Virus code: Chapter 1.

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Maple story:Virus code: Elements!

Prolounge:

It was a nice day in Heneys, all the warriors were traning
for a big event! the strenth emblem event! All warriors wonted the strenth
emblem! But there was this archer… He also disiered the emblem! Though he was
not a warrior, He watchet the event take place all the time!
But this time the event went a little differontly, even the game masters did not
expect it.

Chapter one: event virus!

“All right!” Yelled the young but brave archer by the name of: IVAN-BROOKWOOD!
“Its here! The event of my life!” He yelld while busting his front door open with the sun glaring off his bow and qwiver.
“Iv’e waited so long for this! And its finnaly here!”
“hold up!” says a women’s voice coming from behind him.*
“Look what you did! you broke another window!” She says.
“Mom!” he yells.
“The event is about to start!”
His mother lets out a frustrated sigh.
“All right! but when you get home your cleaning it up!”
“All right mom! see you later!” replies Ivan.

After the conversation he ran towards the portal that just apperd!
He could barly get in from the fluds of people coming out asking for trade and a party!

When he finnaly got over and in the portal every one was starting and readying the event!
Laughing from excitement under his breath,he picket one of the best seats.
Not even,looking he cleared out all the trash by the seat beside him,
and some one apperd!

“Hay Ivan! I see you still have not changed jobs! Why not?”
Just a bit frustrated Ivan replied:
“What Channel did you warp from, Leifgreen?
Leif green replied:
” Chanall 19,why?”
“You are always late!” Says Ivan.
“Can you use thous words together in a sentence?” Asked Leif.
“What words?!” Yells Ivan.
“AIE!” Yelled Leif.
“Im not much into complicated words!”
“Be quite!”yelles ivan! Its about to start!”
And it did!
“Are you ready for the big event?” shouts the man over a huge microphone.
“Its time to start the strenth emblem event for all you fans and protisapaters!
Every one get ready! AND GO!”
“Finnaly!” Says Ivan.
For hours warriors played activates, Fought, climbed, and raced pets for the emblem Ivan always dreamed of.
But, Suddenly in the middle of the event, Ivan sall a purpal and d-n-a-ish looking substence appering every where.
But then the sky turned purpal as well,and a huge one apperd!
Leif stood there staring at it for a while, Then suddenly:
“Get out of here Leif!” Yelled ivan.
Every one was running and some where screming!
“What is that?” Asket Leif.
All of the warriors stood in a defensive posison, But the giant blob struk the warrior at the far left by the stands!
“AAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!” Yelled the warrior loudly.
“come on!” Cried ivan while grabing Leifgreens hands.
“We have got to get out of here!”
Just as Ivan said that the blob turned an d faced Ivan.
It grabed the strength emblem and sucket it up.
“What?” Asks ivan as he was running towrds the portals.
But Suddeny a portal apperd under Ivan, and it sucket him up!
In fear Leif hit the ground, As The monster turned to him.
He dug his face in the ground in even more fear.

But now, ivan, hiting the dusty ground below him, with his eyes closed, listened.
It was silent, no runing, no screming or no felling to the touch.
He slowly got up and looked in front of him. He gasped at what he sall but could not feel the air entering his lung’s.
What he sall was a pale white,see through, Albino boy.
It turned and looked at him,but another portal apperd under Ivan.
Slowly and gracefully he retund back to the event.
The sky was still purpal and he looked down to see his friends Leif’s face to be dug in the ground.
And no one was there…..
Everyone vanished in the air.

Arther quote: I can feel you all around me! Thicking the air im breathing! Holding on to what Im feeling! Savering this heart warming feeling! ~Fly Leif.

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7 thoughts on “MS,Virus code: Chapter 1.”

  1. I have a tole of: 4 finished chapters and im curently working on Chapter 5.
    I will soon post the other 3 chapters, And the fithth one when complete, But im doing a grammer scan on the first chapters.
    Happy mapleing!
    (More to come, )

  2. Got alot to note.
    1. Learn some proper english and grammar
    2. Learn some proper ponctuation
    3. If you didn’t do that of the above your stories aern’t very good. Apart from the fact that you were DrunkDaddy.
    4. I don’t get the story, but other’s might not feel the same.
    5. Meh 5 comments are better than 4
    6. XD Meet Raikou, an ordinary fire mage that like to poke around killing stuff.
    So he wandered down to the octopus field. What happened next? Well shizzle my dizzle! He started to slay octopus! So that’s why the blog’s name is named The heart and soul of an Octopus. Well, soon when he slayed exactly 100 and 1 octopus. He found exactly 50 and ½ hearts and 202 souls. (yay for my math skillz) So the souls turned into soul teddies and then the teddies killed Raikou. But then the hearts turned into Zakums and the Zakums destroyed the world.

    That should be it.

  3. Also, The images are the characters in the Story,
    The first image you can click is Ivan brook wood. (The archer.) More to come so no worrys!
    (Ivan is my real malpe story character but My MS name is Leifgreen. So I dont know what to do for Leifgreens pic,
    err,

  4. err, Ya, Theres more to come and I will change the grammer soon, Sorry.
    (I get that complat a lot, )

  5. Well not boring, they’re OK
    Cuz they’re written by me and not alot of people are on MMO now so they;re considered boring. FOR NOW!

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