The Beginning Part 8

Hi guys. In light that JF has ended his series I’ve decided to try and make my stories even better. -__- (I hope) Well it has hit me that since this is the 8th part I need a new title. I’ve decided to have a contest (if anyone enters)
If your in Scania post your IGN/title and I will give 100k to the winner. If your in Khani post IGN/title and I will give 40k. There is only one winner. Sorry to those people in Bera, Broa, and Windia but if your thinking of making a new char is each of these servers then you get a head start in money. Here goes the 8th one.
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Austin:Fine, you’re going to lose anyway.
Me:Bring it.

I teleported to the right and Austin to the left. I casted Magic Claw and it ripped Austin’s shirt. Then he conjured lightning and it threw me onto the floor. I made my magical Holy Bow and casted Holy Arrow and it missed. I got up and we continued to attack each other with all of our might.

Me:Huff….Puff….You’ve gotten stronger.
Austin:Huff..So have you.

We kept missing each other because we were so tired. Then with the rest of my strenth I used Holy Arrow and it hit Austin straight in the heart. I was so tired I couldn’t heal myself or finish Austin off. Eric and Bij carried me to the Orbis hospital.

*1 week later*
There were bright lights everywhere. I was in blood stained cloths in a comfortable bed.

Me:*thinking*Where am I?

Then the door opened and Sophie came in.

Sophie:CHARLES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Me:Huh??? What happened?

Sophie told me about the the battle and then I remembered. She was telling me about how everyone was so worried when the rest of the group came in.

Everyone:CHARLES!!! When did you wake!?!
Me:Just now….Can I get up?

I quickly got out of the room before anyone could say anymore. My cloths were torn up and my wand was broken. Not that I needed the wand anymore. I could finally weild an Arc Staff. I went to my safety deposit box and I took my new weapon out. I decided to wear some noobie cloths when I took my torn up Starlight to the tailor. I gave him 1000 mesos and the tailor said to come by later. I was still very weak so I decided to rest in the hotel. Then I thought about Zakum and how I would ever defeat such a powerful monster. Sophie came in my room and laid down in the bed beside me.

Sophie:Charles are you ok?
Me:Of course I’m ok. Why wouldn’t I be?
Sophie:James told me about Zakum and your father.
Me:*thinking*Damn James……*talking*It doesn’t matter we will take him down when we are stronger.

I lay with her thinking how great it was to have a girlfriend so nice and beautiful. I dozed off but a few hours later I was awaken by a knocking on my door.

TO BE CONTINUED
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Well maybe this one was short but I couldn’t think of anything else. Don’t forget to suggest titles. I hope you liked it. Can you guys suggest tips too? Thanks.

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4 thoughts on “The Beginning Part 8”

  1. How about the Rivals i dunno worth a shot i guess my names cyan400 in scania

  2. it was preety good but you can try to make them alittle more longer and the fight could’ve been alittle more descriptive. i dunno. i thought it was good still.

    a new title could be Revenge Through Death

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