The Beginning Part 3

Hello it’s me again. Well I’d like to thank all of the people that read my serires with the nice comments and feedback. You might as well read the rest of my series because you won’t understand this otherwise. Well here’s my shot at the 3rd one. Here we go! -Note- There might be romance in a way.
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As we all met and told our stories we were all amazed. Powered up so much more all of us went to have another try at the blue mushroom. As we all saw it again we were nervous. It wasn’t alone. There were 4.

Me:MAGIC CLAW!
Bij:DOUBLE SHOT!
Eric:POWER STRIKE!
James:LUCKY 7!

We were amazed when everything fell when we hit them. We decided to eat after concentrating so hard to destroy the blue mushrooms because it expended so much energy. I bought a newspaper from the lady at the Henesys Potion Shop for 100 mesos. It said that 4 level 70’s died trying to defeat the legendary Zakum. While I was looking at the pictures I remembered that they were the 4 people that saved our lives when they were trying to defeat the blue mushroom the first time. Then I dropped my watermelon when I read the names. The ‘s name fighter’s was Jacob Huang, the cleric’s was John Kim, the assassin’s was Micheal Yang, and the hunter’s name was Dylan Hadady. That was all of my friend’s last names. We thought and all called our mom’s. We asked if our dad’s names were Jacob, John, Micheal, and Dylan. They said yes they were and we hung up. Speechless we turned to each other. I was crestfallen.

Me:What is this Zakum that killed our father’s? I heard our fathers were some of the greatest….
Eric:Well I don’t think 4 level 70’s can take a Zakum on. It has more than 1billion HP and it’s level 120.
Bij:That’s most likely true.
James:”Sigh” I wish they taught us some things before they died. Maybe they could’ve recognized us at least.
Me:They did….At least my father did. He asked if he ever saw me before and I didn’t remember him. My fault.
Bij:No it’s not your fault, you just forgot your father’s face, we all did.
Me:Well I vow that I will destroy Zakum and bring peace once and for all.
Bij:I do as well.
James:As do I.
Eric:Same as all of you.

After we were all done sobbing like little girls (XD) the friends went off and even if it was slow leveling they all sticked together. They trained hardcore together. They decided green mushroom was a great place to train. They didn’t level to quickly either. Then we all met a girl and her name was Susan. She was a nice friend and she was a bandit. It looked as if though James liked her. She left us because she had “family buisness” and we teased James because she was going to be gone for 4 months. My friends said that we should be level 115 until we fight Zakum. I agreed and it takes about 10-20 years to reach that level so we decided to stick together like glue and tape. We were level 25 after a week of hard training and nothing else when we were in our hotel and on the newpaper I had subscribed it said some party quest of some sort was for level 21-30 so we went to Kerning City and decided to take on the challange. Lakelis, the lady who ran the party quests said we were a worthy party of 4 so we enter a swampy area. There were Ligators that dropped passes when killed so we each collected 25 and went to Cloto so she used the passes to open the portal. Then in the next 3 portal since I, the mage had the most intelligence, I figured out all the codes and told my friends to go on the right numbers. Then in what was supposed to be the last stage we defeated a few minor monsters and picked up the passes. Then we saw the biggest slime in the entire world.

Me:WHAT THE HECK IS THIS THING!
Bij:I DON’T KNOW I AM WEAK AGAINST IT!!
Me:James and I will have to take it down.

Bij and Eric looked helpless. Then the huge slime summoned little ones and Eric and Bij destroyed them in an instant. Then we destroyed it and the remains were tiny slimes that Eric and Bij yet again destoryed. Then we talked to Cloto and she gave me a set of cross earrings, lightning earrings, and 5 blacks ores. All she said is use them well and she did a spell that teleported us to a map with unlimited horny and green mushrooms. We kept taking them down for 20 minutes and we left. We all leveled to level 26 and kept doing the quest until level 28. My friends were nice because even though they had their level 25 cloths they followed me to Ellinia to get my level 28 cloths and weapon. We were all rich but I was the best saver and had 200k. Bij 180k, Eric 175k, and James 112k. He was poor because he had to buy good stars called mokbis (fine, fine, I know mokbis aren’t good). It proved a great item because he out damaged us all. Well then they went to go meet Susan again at the train station but it wasn’t only Susan they met. A boy was kissing her at the station. James was storming to them.

TO BE CONTINUED
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HAHA I AM VERY EVIL!!!!!! Well I guess I’ll put Susan on the character map. Well I hope you like the story better since there is actually a purpose to it. By the way I’m going to put some other thing after they defeat Zakum so this story is going take a very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, long time so I hope you like that. I will not rush the levels so no worries. This was Charles and I’m out again.

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10 thoughts on “The Beginning Part 3”

  1. Pretty nice, but it could usea lil more emotion. I mean 4 peoples dads just died. Also, if u guys were rich im bill friggin Gates! j/k nice story

  2. very good and its very creative. This maked it as if maplestory was for reallife.

  3. Um, I all can say is less emo-cons and more descriptions?, Anyways good chappie~ Waitin for the next one =]

  4. How come this stuff gets noticed and my writing doesn’t?

    Whatever, everyone just hates me.

  5. ooh no not another blog with zakum if read like 10 of those story with zakum does it ever end , (no)

  6. lol nice but you should make more details for the dads and i love the cheating part of susan

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