In Henesys, it was a peaceful day. Then a begginner asked a Sniper resting, Sir, where is Athena? The Sniper proudly answered Far east of the mushroom park. The begginner walked all the way to Athena’s house. Athena said “welcome, I expecting you.”
She became a bowgirl & thus she set off to Ellinia, where her father, a Priest, was waiting for her. They went to the very top of Ellinia, so she could meet for the first time her great grandfather.
So, she met her great grandfather Grendel. Grendel told her about her special traits. Afterwards she went to Kerning City, where she was kidnapped by a Hermit, after she was rescued by her father, she went to party quest with her friends.
After a few PQs she went to make her job advancement. After she became a Huntress she realized that, her skills, were extremely unique. She went to ask Grendel why. He said that she was chosen for the crystal.
Afterwards she went to look for the crystal, whereas she went to sleep and in the next morning she found herself in El Nath….what could’ve happened?
Try to make it a (lot) longer ^_^
Hehe, these prolouges are just, well, short, just wait till you see the episodes xD
Quotations help with understanding when dialouge starts and ends.
It’s kinda hard to understand.
I mean, she just gets kidnapped and magically rescued?
Fresh, Literate ideas, people.
It’s just a small prolouge, more like a short summarry.
This is a far too concise summary of too large a story. Try making it longer and don’t give out the entire plot/story in one blog.
if she is grendel’s daughter, isn’t she like super-old? I’m talking 500+ years here
after all, he is grendel the really really old
also, make it longer, etc etc, I think lunar covered all of that
~Guy of Die
This is too short, and cliched beyond belief.
Isn’t a story only supposed to have one prologue?
-=The Nazgul=-
This is a summary, not a prologue. Were it a prologue, it would act to build suspense, not take all the suspense away.
Also, your plot sounds like something out of a generimeme. “She’s Grendel’s granddaughter! She got kidnapped by an eeeeevil Hermit! And OMG SHE’S SPESHUL!” If you want to make a really good story, make it stand out (i.e. give it a less generic plot) and get rid of this summary, because you’ve effectively sucked any suspense that there might be out of this story.
Also, your plot sounds like something out of a generimeme. “She’s Grendel’s granddaughter! She got kidnapped by an eeeeevil Hermit! And OMG SHE’S SPESHUL!” If you want to make a really good story, make it stand out (i.e. give it a less generic plot) and get rid of this summary, because you’ve effectively sucked any suspense that there might be out of this story.”
Yes you’re right, Im just bad at making prolouges, oh well, I’ll do my best next time.