MagicalChryshalis, Chapter 1

As Yoshino and Rika reached the Mushroom town of Henesys, they instantly started collecting information about the deforestation of Perion. As the day finished Yoshino and Rika din’t find any useful information. During the cold, breezy night they set off to Perion, to search for information. When they reached Perion during the morning, they asked Blackbull about the deforestation. However Blackbull, the great elder of Perion, founder of Perion, knew nothing about it.

” Where is Sharenian?,” asked Yoshino.

” Deep in the excavation site,” kindly replied Blackbull.

Yoshino and Rika took the shortest route to the excavation site, which was through the rocky mountains. As they reached overnight it was already dark and cloudy. Yoshino could only see sand in Sharenian. They walked a bit through the dark sand of the desert in Sharenian. Yoshino saw a small tent in the middle of the desert, she rapidly thought something and shouted it.

” Spiceh, Jose!!!!,” shouted Yoshino.

” Don’t scream, you’re calling the monsters,” said Rika.

As they both ran towards the tent they both found out that Spiceh and Jose were sleeping. Yoshino used her arrow bomb in order to start a fire; took some cooking supplies they had in the tent and started cooking Ramen. The smell was overpowering their sleep, thus waking them up.

” Ramen!!!” shouted Spiceh and Jose.

” What are you doing here Yoshino, and, who is that girl?,” asked Jose.

” This is Rika, we were looking for you guys,” replied Yoshino.

” Save the chit chat later, it’s time to eat Ramen,” said Spiceh.

” Agreed,” said Jose.

As all 4 of them sat down, they each served themselves a cup of Ramen. They talked overnight about plans and ways to reforest Perion . Overnight, right around 12:00 midnight, they heard bones. Cracking bones.

” Skeleton Soldiers, ready your weapons,” whispered Rika.

Sorry to break your bubble but we don’t have any weapons, ” said Jose.

Do I have to do everything myself!!??, ” shouted Rika.

Duh, ” said Spiceh, Jose and Yoshino.

As the soldiers were closing in Rika was chanting her strongest spell. Counting about 500 Skeleton Soldiers, it would be hard to kill them all in 1 spell she thought. The soldiers were already 20 feet away from them.

” Quickly, finish them!,” shouted Yoshino.

I call upon the heavenly mistress of Ice, grant me thy power in order to freeze the enemy into eternal cage, Crystal Storm!, ” shouted Rika.

In 5 seconds thousands of Ice needles came flying down like rockets. Aimlessly hitting every soldier in sight, freezing them till their bones break. During the midst of the spell Rika mysteriously dissapeared into nothingness.

” Where is Rika?,” asked Spiceh.

” I don’t know,” replied Jose and Yoshino.

After the short battle with the skeletons, they went back to the Sharienan Palace’s location, which was gone.

” Where is the palace?,” asked Yoshino.

” I’m pretty sure it turned into Ramen,” thought Spiceh.

” Wow, a blue shard, cute,” said Spiceh.

” That’s from the forest!” shouted Yoshino.

” What?, this is a piece from the 2nd wonder!?,” asked Jose.

” Yes..,” replied Yoshino.

” A Chief Bandit named Cobalt destroyed the Crystal, that’s what cause Perion to deforest,” explained Yoshino.

” We should protect the 3rd wonder in the Magical Library,” said Jose.

As they walked towards Ellinia eliminating and destroying every Slime that got in they’re way. Upon reaching Ellinia they went to the station, got their tickets and took the express ship to Ludibruim. The ship was small, in the shape of an Angel, it launched rapidly when the 3 got in going at the speed of 100mph. They reached Ludibruim in 10 minutes. When they reached Ludibruim they went to Ludiruim Village EAST SIDE. It was then they found Helios Tower. They walked it down killing every Retz in the way. As they reached the Royal Magical Library, Cobalt was already there.

So you finally got here Yoshino, I was waiting for you, ” said Cobalt.

” Why did you destroy the 2nd wonder, the crystal of the forests!?,” shouted Yoshino.

Because I told him to do so, ” said the mysterious voice.

As the place grew more desolate and dark, visibility was dropping. Suddenly the 3rd wonder started shining.

” Hurry finish them up,” said the voice.

” Yes master,” agreed Cobalt

As the mysterious figure appeared, it turned out to be Rika.

Rika!! what are you doing here!?,” shouted Yoshino.

” Shes obviously Cobalt’s master,” said Spiceh.

Spiceh and Yoshino stood close to the book, to be aware that Rika and Cobalt weren’t gonna strike and destroy it in the midst of the battle.

” Cobalt, I’m gonna be your opponent,” said Jose.

Fine,” said Cobalt.

Both of them drew out their daggers and prepared for battle. As their battle started and raged on, they were both fighting fiercely and equally.

” Join us, Yoshino, your archery skills are perfect,” said Rika.

Yoshino rapidly drew out her Olympus, preparing her Soul Arrow.

” Yoshino, if I were you, I’d sit quietly,” said Spiceh.

” Arrow bomb!!,” shouted Yoshino.

A huge arrow flew towards Rika. However Rika din’t even budge to dodge it. As the arrow touched Rika, it exploded into a huge blast. Rika had actually teleported nanoseconds before the arrow touched her.

” Good power, just what I need,” said Rika.

Jose and Cobalt were completely tired from the fight, they could’nt even completely the combo of Savage Blow.

” Retreat Cobalt, we are wasting time,” said Rika.

” Let them go Yoshino,” said Spiceh.

” With thy power of holyness, ye shall grant me thy access to the greatest force that exists, in order to eliminate ye evil force, Quantium Holy!!,” chanted Spiceh.

Creating a huge force of holy power heavily damaging Rika and Cobalt, making them unable to move.

” Weak, you are not ready to be on my team lilttle Cleric,” said Rika.

” I don’t care, I’m never joining you,” replied Spiceh.

Cobalt and Rika used a special kind of teleport to go back to their town, El Nath.

” We have to go to the location of the 1st wonder, Aqua World,” said Yoshino.

” Agreed,” said Jose and Spiceh.

As our 3 heroes walked up Helios tower, bought their new equipment in the Ludibruim weapon shop to get ready for the next battle, which will be harder than ever.

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Grawr, please post any gramatical errors in the story, and anything I can improve on, so the next chapters can be a whole lot better, they’ll be a whole lot better with all your help.

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I feel loved and inspired writing this story, when I was writing it some parts made me cry, ;~;.

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I <3 cats, like I said, please post any comments that I can improve on/ errors.

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Special Thanks:
Everyone that reads my stories, will be awarded with exciting adventures.

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The part where Rika says ” Skeleton Soldiers, ready your weapons,” she was ordering the soldiers, sorry for not pointing it out.

8 thoughts on “MagicalChryshalis, Chapter 1”

  1. ” As Yoshino and Rika reached the Archer, mushroom town of Henesys”

    Eek, Archer, mushroom town? 😡

    ” Skeleton Soldiers, ready your weapons,” said Rika.”

    Sounds like Rika is ordering the soldiers, maybe change it to: “Damn, Skeleton Soldiers are here,” Rika swore, “get the weapons ready, I think they’re near. .”

    “Aimlessly hitting every soldier in sight, freezing them till their bones break.”

    Eh?. . . Aimlessly?. . I would say smiting is more like it. 😮

    “As our 3 heroes walked up Helios tower, bought their new equipment in the Ludibruim (Ludibrium*) weapon shop to get ready for the next battle, which will be harder than ever.”

    You sound like the pokemon narrator. 😡 Keep the people in suspense, if you tell them that: “Oh, there is a battle, and it will be hard!” I don’t think so many people would bother to read the next chapter. . =X

    Anywho. . could use amelioration but it’s ok.
    I’m still wondering which parts made you cry. . . 😡

  2. Darkwar4ever said: “”

    ” Skeleton Soldiers, ready your weapons,” said Rika.”

    She was ordering the skeleton soldiers. =x

  3. Owned at criticizing. That’s a first.

    Anyways, there is something wrong with it. I can’t really place my digit, because it’s a lot of small, insignificant details that add up into a mess.
    Good luck with the next chapter.

    ~~~~Pirkid~~~~

  4. Fenrir said: “Ditto pirkid.

    Something seems missing. . .

    0_o?”

    I think it’s the characteristics of teh characters o.O I din’t put em. XDD

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