betrayed part 2

Guys, b4 I write this story, Crystal asked me to put her Japanese name (fugirawa) or put her real name which is Krystal

“Who?!” shouted everybody in a worried voice.
I said (calmly): “I’ll take you there later just take us to the area where everybody got kidnapped alright?”
“Kay,” Amanda said in a not very sure voice.
“Have faith guys have faith.” Pete said in a firm voice.
Then suddenly Amanda said: “were here”
“Alright, Fugiwara, get out your dog to sniff for a scent.” I said and gave the dog piece of cloth to give him a scent.
Denise said in a puzzled voice:” why on earth did you fluffy the piece of cloth
“Just see.” said I with a grin on my face.
Suddenly, the dog kept on barking at a spot as if he was trying to tell us some thing then he ran off.
“FOLLOW THAT DOG!!” commanded Pete.
We ran off as quick as lighting soon he leaded us to the cursed sanctuary.
He leaded us to a small house.
On the door it wrote something in a different language.
“What does it say James? I know its in fairy language.” said Pete
I said: “I haven’t read fairy for such a long time.” Then I put my fingers on the door and then I chanted it.
The door opened and in a blue light, a dagger was pointed at my neck.
Then a strange voice said: “hi, bro.”

To be continued
Well I know what to write in the next one.
Because it’s all fighting I thought, I would keep the people in suspense
So if you want it longer I’ll write it in the next one I write.

2 thoughts on “betrayed part 2”

  1. SShortSShort.

    2 short man, and try to revise grammar and ponctuation. Smack* Perfecto.

  2. pretty good, better tehn me but kinda the same comment as darkwar so rock on!
    ^_^~sellsword

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