Life On A Ship-Chapter Six with forms

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Liam reached Akio. He noticed Mark was alive. “How are you alive?” Liam said. Mark turned around and saw the warrior with the big doombringer. “Akio run! Listen to me” Mark said. Liam ran away from Mark and chased after Akio. Mark took his Throns and launched a holy arrow. It hit the warrior. Liam was in pain. He got back up. Liam disappeared. He ran behind Mark and hit him with the doombringer, but he missed. Akio was scared he didn’t want to be taken away to that place again. He took his fairy wand and fired holy arrows rapidly. They barely hurt Liam. Akio thought:
Mark was right.
I should just let him handle it.
I can’t do anything.
Akio clutched his fairy wand.
Meanwhile
Mark dodged Liam’s doombringer. He checked to see how Akio was doing, he was shaking on the ground. What was wrong? Liam said, “He has a disease. It’s from the curse my master put on him.” Akio’s skin started drying and he started choking. His skin split open, he started to bleed. Mark teleported over and healed Akio. Akio could talk for a few mintued but then he went back to being the way he was before, choking. Liam hit Mark in the side right near the hip. Mark’s legs gave out on him. He collapsed. While he was knocked out he had a dream. Was it true? He saw:
Akio’s parents
What was it?
A person screaming in Agony.
Mark got up. He starting teleporting in the direction he thought the base was in. After seven non-stop hours of searching he found the base. He walked threw the doors. There laying on a table was Akio. Mark thought:
What the heck is this?
Is he dead?
Do they know I’m here?

Mark slowly walked towards the table.
Poof!

The Tamer: What are you an idiot?
Mark: What did you do with Akio
The Tamer: Oh, don’t worry about him you should worry about yourself.
Mark: What did you do to him…
The Tamer: Oh, “we” tortured him.
Mark: Who’s we?
The Tamer: Oh I don’t know….maybe his Mother,Father, and Liam.
Mark: They’re dead though aren’t they?
The Tamer: Not exactly
They never really died. I just got a couple of dead bodies and screwed around with them
Mark: You’re so cruel…
The Tamer: Your going to have to die….I can’t let you go on the ship…if you get me the barlog or not…your going to die…You know to much….
The Tamer fired the beam at Mark. He got hit and died.
Mother: Akio wake up!
Akio: H-Hello?
Mother: Akio it’s your mother…
Akio: Impossible they’re dead.
Mother: You have a deadly disease.
Akio: I-I do?
Mother: Take a look at your skin…
Akio’s skin was split open and dried up…every minute another part of it cracked more and more and more soon he’d bleed to death
The Tamer walked into the room where Akio was with Mark thrown over his shoulders. “Akio…” The Tamer said. “What..” he replied. “Mark…I killed him…if you listen to us we will let you go…”

To Be Continued!!
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Forms….!!
Name:
Age:
Class:
Armor and weapon:

you are all going to be evil might include some of u now and later if i get alot

10 thoughts on “Life On A Ship-Chapter Six with forms”

  1. Harry Potter said: “

    The Sprite Factory Owner said: “Nice story”

    yea i know right?”

    Woo you rock!

  2. The Sprite Factory Owner said: “Submit to the Sublymonal project.”

    o_o

    Good chapter. I like this and #4 the best so far.

    Lol. My favorite part was this:

    The Tamer fired the beam at Mark. He got hit and died.

    Lol. I’ll miss Mark.

  3. Wow good job and the chatting parts are good too. . .(off topic much?)
    Anyways Bravo Bravo REgazze

  4. Some of your story is a little choppy though. :

    And I got confused a lot, everything was sorta… crammed… together-ish. And I think there were a few spelling errors. ;D

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