A Hostage’s Tale Ch – 1

Chapter One: A Cold, Bloody Death

January 1, 2007
Weather: Cold
Location: El Nath near Jr. Yetis

Billy rested his spear on his shoulder as he continued walking towards the next portal. He noticed a figure in the distance, thinking it was a Yeti and readied his spear. Billy hustled towards the figure and was ready to swing his spear.

“Hey you!” Billy yelled in a nasty voice.

He saw the figure move as if it were to turn towards him. When Billy was face to face with the person it turned out to be a wounded young lady.

“What..?” She said panting.

“Oh, are you alright?” Billy said shocked.

She didn’t reply. Billy just stood there and watched her as another wound appeared on her face. He was confused and didn’t know what was going on. Billy then noticed all the people surrounding the girl and then his eyes widened.

“What the heck is going on,” Billy asked, “wounds are just mysteriously appearing on your face. Why is that?”

“I’m in a fight with someone if you haven’t noticed. That’s why everyone is laying down. He or she is too fast for me to see.” she replied nastily.

Billy walked over in front of the girl. He put his spear in front of him to protect him. Billy then swung his spear as quickly as he could. Blood stained the spear as the person stopped.

“Heh. Lucky shot.” Billy said.

“You said it, kid. That’s the only way someone can stop me. Well, bye.” the mysterious person said.

Billy’s surroundings turned purple. He was shocked and looked around trying to find, well, anything he could, but he couldn’t find anything. It was just completely purple, but then it turned black and then he smacked his body smacked something hard. He lifted his head up, finding himself in a cold, damp, dark room.

“Hello, Billy.” a voice said.

Billy shifted the other way finding a middle aged man on the screen.

“I bet you’re wondering what you are doing here.” the screen said.

Billy nodded.

“I noticed you hit one of my fastest and strongest apprentices. I was hoping it would attract the stronger fighters.” he said.

Billy sighed, “Get on with it. I don’t have a lot of time. Well, I do but, I just want to get out of her. Oh, and it was luck.”

“It wasn’t luck, boy. As a matter a fact it’s an ability.” he replied.

“Oh, is it?” Billy replied paying no attention.

“Ever since I saw you fight him for those thirty seconds that made me want to make you my own. Would you like to become my apprentice?” the man said.

“Nope.” Billy said.

“Very well, but on one condition I’ll let you go. You have to beat all of the men I send into the room your in right now. If you lose then you have to become my apprentice. If you win then I’ll let you go.” the man said.

“Fine. I guess it will make me a bit stronger. I mean how many people could it be?” Billy said very confident in himself.

Billy heard somebody turn the knob on the door; it opened very wide. About twenty people entered the room at once.

“That’s no fair. How am I supposed to beat all of them.” Billy complained.

He spread out his legs a bit and readied his spear and then sighed. Billy waited for the twenty of them to come running towards him, but he had no patience and decided to attack them.

January 1, 2007
Weather: Cold
Location: El Nath

Billy defeated all twenty people without being wounded. He started walking once more to his destination until he found blood stains on the ground. He looked up and saw the same girl from before laying on the ground dead. A piece of paper started floating down from the air and it said,

Dear Billy,
We got revenge since you didn’t join us. I hope you think before you do something next time or the same thing will keep happening to innocent people.

That was the end of the message. Billy checked the girl’s pulse and didn’t feel anything beating. She was dead.

Billy thought, “Do they have something to do with my mission or is that something completely different. This is such a pain. There are people being held as hostages and possibly several other people that are dead because of me.”

“Two missions at once is impossible. Somebody else is going to have to do that one because there is nothing I can or will do.” Billy said to himself.

Billy put away his spear in his bag. It was almost midnight and Billy was getting tired from all the traveling. He decided to use Yeti skins and their bones to make a small tent to sleep in, but it was a scary fact that as soon as he fell asleep he could die instantly from a pack of Yetis attacking him.

Before Billy wanted to bad he carved into the skin of a Yeti with a sharp bone and wrote everything suspicious down that he had experience today. He was going to write down something suspicious that he found everyday, so it would make his job easier.

Day One

Taken you a suspicious place and then got attacked.

“Well, time to go to sleep.” he said.

Billy shut his eyes and fell asleep after ten minutes, but he was woken about ten minutes later after getting attacked by a Yeti.

What is the wet liquid below me? Is it my blood? I am to afraid to look and when I try to I can’t even move my head. Am I dead? Am I dying? What happened? I’m confused.

January 2, 2007
Weather: Cold
Location: El Nath Hospital

Beep …Beep …Beep

I don’t like the words I’m hearing or am I just hearing things. Is this a dream?

“Is he going to live?”

“It’s possible, but I doubt it.”

“When should we tell him?”

“He wont find out.”

“Mm..” Billy tried to speak, but there was too much pain. Maybe not in his mouth, but all over his body.

Stupid Billy! It was your idea sleeping out in one of the most dangerous spots ever! Oh, man I don’t feel so good now.

“He’s lost consciousness!”

“Dammit! He’s having a heart attack!”

Billy was having a heart attack. The injuries had nothing to do with the heart attack; it was just bad luck. It was a high possibility of him dying now because of all the stuff he had on protecting him from the snow and keeping him warm.”

“Hurry!”

“I’m trying!”

To Be Continued

Lol Sorry it’s not six pages It was more like four.

Well, I hoped you enjoyed it.

Ummm

Errr

Ummm

Uhhh

Click the like button! There we go.

20 thoughts on “A Hostage’s Tale Ch – 1”

  1. It’s actually pretty good, well I’m not sure, I kinda suck at fan fics, well at least I think I do, but I like writing them ^^ I agree with Nazgul too, corny dialogue, make it more realistic. ^^

  2. BlackNazgul said: “Something about the dialogue seems too corny to be real.

    -=The Nazgul=-“

    Agreed, oh and:

    Billy defeated all twenty people without being wounded

    What the hell, WITHOUT GETTING HARMED? I understand that Billy is the main character, but Twenty people against ONE Person, and he’s unharmed. Wow, just wow.

  3. AwSnapeLz said: “

    BlackNazgul said: “Something about the dialogue seems too corny to be real.

    -=The Nazgul=-“

    Agreed, oh and:

    Billy defeated all twenty people without being wounded”

    What the hell, WITHOUT GETTING HARMED? I understand that Billy is the main character, but Twenty people against ONE Person, and he’s unharmed. Wow, just wow.

    That is possible in a Jet Li movie, I suppose.

  4. Dest1 said: “

    AwSnapeLz said: “

    BlackNazgul said: “Something about the dialogue seems too corny to be real.

    -=The Nazgul=-“

    Agreed, oh and:

    Billy defeated all twenty people without being wounded”

    What the hell, WITHOUT GETTING HARMED? I understand that Billy is the main character, but Twenty people against ONE Person, and he’s unharmed. Wow, just wow.”

    That is possible in a Jet Li movie, I suppose.

    Interesting. I’mma forum that (different text for the quotes).

  5. Dest1 said: “

    AwSnapeLz said: “

    BlackNazgul said: “Something about the dialogue seems too corny to be real.

    -=The Nazgul=-“

    Agreed, oh and:

    Billy defeated all twenty people without being wounded”

    What the hell, WITHOUT GETTING HARMED? I understand that Billy is the main character, but Twenty people against ONE Person, and he’s unharmed. Wow, just wow.”

    That is possible in a Jet Li movie, I suppose.

    I don’t think this would turn out to be some Jet Li movie, where Billy is Jet Li.
    @Cheeze: NOU! >:U

  6. lol lets just say jet li is an asian fighter oo Who’s like really strong, I’ll leave it at that. and its more like 2 pages if you didn’t space oo

  7. Not bad. Your paragrapsh are a bit short, but that’s ok, it’s the quality, not quantity that counts!

    -=The Nazgul=-

Comments are closed.